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Discussions about sex => Erotic Stories => Topic started by: hentaiboy69 on November 23, 2012, 09:38:56 AM
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Dear friends, after had taking a look to one of the two site where i host my image and reading the last part of an interactive comic, something had born in my mind.
Anyway....let me explain what is an interactive comic first!
Everything is similar to a normal comics, whit main character, event and choise to do to let the events continue: it is here where the comic turn to an interctive thing. The author (or as he call him, the story teller) had published a panel with 3 different option and the other users have to choose the one to continue the story. In this case, a virgin girl transported on a strange world, is walking between stone statue of couple having sex, when a sort of magic dildo (lol!) talk to her asking to free it and he will help her to come back to her world. To do it, she need a lube and here come the choise:
- using saliva and her hand
- using mouth only
- using pussy juice
every choise can lead to the goal but there can be some side effect....different, probably...eh eh! can't wait to read the next strip!
Anyway....back to my idea: i was thinking, why can't we try something similar with a story!? Someone can start it and lead it till the character have to make a choise to solve a situation. At this point, we can open a poll with the option and after a week the story can continue following the result of the poll!
I know it's a little complex thing, but i find it interessing! Please, my friends....share your thoughs about this strange idea!
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If there is someone writing the story I will vote :)
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I really like this idea, be a big commitment for the author, but I think it would be great. Any authors out there want to try it?
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I would like to try, but it will take me too much time to post the story......writing in italian then translating! and, of course, all the other stuff i have in progress!
anyway, no need to hurry at the moment....let's see if someone is interessed in it!
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Maybe it can be done in a collaboration form....2 or maybe 3 of us interessed in this project can work on the story!
Anyway.....to make this project works fine, we have to point on a fantasy or a thiller! a common one can offer low chance to be relly interessing with multiple choise.
Honestly, i have an old experiment done (a fantasy story i had deleted from here) but i have to rework it a little, but not sure if i can use it properly.....
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I like your idea HB how about we vote on the story line and how writes the next part
I'm sure there will be enough of us to make it work
I can remember reading Adventure book like that when i was younger ( yes along time age before any says anything )
Great Idea my sweet :-* :-*
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Well, of course the decision of the readers gonna change the story line in some point but i think all will be principaly in the hands of the story teller (only one or maybe a group) who will take the main line and adapt it when needed.
Next time i catch you up, i want to hear your completed impression!
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Now....while i'm working at the "creature" for Xmas (lol! sound weird!), i'm thinking at this project too.
The idea, at the moment, is to use those two characters of mine
(http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/121/a/e/elves_sisters_by_hentaiboy77-d4y6ulg.jpg)
Even as child, despite her slight figure, Phylia has shown to have significant force, which she has always put it at the service of her village and once she become an adult, she was given command of the Wardens, the defender of the forest. Many elves wanted the honor of being chosen by her as companions for life, be able to caress her strong and vigorous body, but at the same time able to express an innate grace and femininity. Phylia has always refused their avances ........ the only thing that was really important for her was to protect her village and her little sister.
Aily, unlike her sister, has always been a shy girl, but if necessary has always demonstrated to has an excellent control of the fourth elements, specially the one of fire, a very rare thing for elves born in the Everious forest. But there is something she has in common with her oldest sister .... her beauty! Her long silver hair caressed by the wind and her white skin, had made dream all the elves of the village but no one has ever managed to gain her heart and her soft and sensual lips…..
They were celebrate as the incarnation of the nature by the other elves of the village and even if they were the youngest adults of the entire community, everyone has the max respect for them and even the elders had ask for their help for different sensitive questions.
and try to elaborate the old story i had start to write about them some time ago.
I have to change the begin a little and add some parts at the story i had write here and there to make it perfect (the one i had write at that time have too many missing element!). When this is set, i can lead the story to the first fork and add the poll......the problem is how long this will take....crap!
mumble mumble......i'm so tempted to try and write it immidiatly in english, but i really need an hand in this! Is someone up to collaborrate in this!?
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When this is set, i can lead the story to the first fork and add the poll......the problem is how long this will take....crap!
Do you need some pressure? Shall I give you a deadline ;)
mumble mumble......i'm so tempted to try and write it immidiatly in english, but i really need an hand in this! Is someone up to collaborrate in this!?
This has to be an italian... perhaps you can ask Medjai?
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Madjai....he is not always online recently.
Anyway, he (or she....) don't have to be italian, we can split the work. i need to think more on this aspect, dunno.....at the moment i'm just collecting idea for this project
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Love the two character's cant wait to get involved with the story line
I thinks its going to be good fun
mmmwwaahhhhh
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I think you must wait a little.....but dunno how "small" this little will be! ::)
p.s.:
if someone want to work to the small description of the two elves and modify it, feel free to do it!
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When this is set, i can lead the story to the first fork and add the poll......the problem is how long this will take....crap!
Do you need some pressure? Shall I give you a deadline ;)
No need pressure Lover.....i had just start to rework that old story yesterday evening and a little today after lunch and i think i'm at good point and maybe i can post it soon cause this is just a short intro to the two characters.
Aaaand, soon you must do the first choise! ;D
Let's talk about rules.....
I'll gonna post the story and when an important choise in the storyline will be taken, i'll gonna add a poll (is it possible to change a poll!? or i need to create different thread!?) and it gonna run for around a week.
Whene the poll is closed, i'll gonna work on the new part of the story and then post it.
Comment and idea about the choise everyone make are welcome and can be added to the story as part of it. From me, i will try to work faster as i can on the part.....and hope this will turn a good experiment!
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This is a wonderful idea !!! :D
I am hurry to read the first part !!!! :P
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My sweet Eve, first part isn't so long, so read it reaaaaaaallyyyyyyyy sloooowlyyyyyy! ;D ;D
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Don't add comments.. add the story ;D
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lol.......i will do it when it's ready......so, shut up and wait! ;D ::)
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Yeah ... ;) you tell him my sweet :-*
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Tango........lol! of course i'm kidding, guys.....i will never ask to shut up to a nice friend as Lover is!
BTW......the wait will be short, cause i have the story ready, just need to re-read it and make some correction if needed, then before the weekend ends, it will be posted here!
P.S.:
I ask again....it's possible to reset a poll and restart it!?
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'k....i find the answer my self....soon the first part, the prologue!
Just need a little favour......would someone of our friendly english speaker try to write a good description of the two elves, please!? some short but who can identify them well!
Take a look at what i had add under the pics of them!
Whoever do it, will have my gratitude! :-*
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I'll gladly do the descriptions & PM it to you this weekend. Sorry, work has kept me busy lately but will get on it as soon as I can :)
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And i'll thank you for your help till now! I own you a drink at the B&G!
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And here we go with the first part!
The poll: Where are the two girls now!?
- In the hold of a ship
- In a cell of a slave market
I'm trying to figured out both the situation at great line, but now all depends on you, my friends! are they in a ship traveling on see or at an harbor ready to sail, or a are they in a market where they gonna be selled as slave!?
Make your choise in the story thread and post yopur comment here!
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Ladies and gentlemen, i had seen votes coming....but don't forget to post comment! they are appreciated too!
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I was the one voting for "In the hold of a ship". I'm sure they don't wanna sell them as simple slaves - and I also don't want it :D In my opinion, being in the hold can give us some great adventures.
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@ Lover When they go to Market who or what will bye them.
And I can't see Phylia not escaping to find her sister and now she has a new friend to look after to.
It could always be a nice ship owner looking for a new cabin mate????
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@ Tango: I'm sure there would be anybody buying them or just one of them.
The ship still can be in harbour and she is able to escape or they will meet after having experienced several adventures. Indeed the captain can be a nice owner - somebody supporting elves...
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Well, both the option can lead to several adventures.....but it don't mean they had to start immediatily! don't forget Phylia was stabbed by a sword!
All can start from the market or maybe on the big ocean.....who know!? i can lead her in the journey, but in some crucial events, all here can choose their destiny!
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Come on! you have till sunday to vote and post your comment on the next line! hurry up!
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I like the slave option best, I dont want her to far away she cant find her sister and be reunited ... they must band together , rebuild their village and take on the might of the nasty humans ...
Loved It HB .... really fires the imagination... cant wait for the next episode :)
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Ok...poll is now closed and here is waht you have choose!
The poll: Where are the two girls now!?
- In the hold of a ship 1
- In a cell of a slave market 6
now it's my turn to write......and to realize something good to show you!
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Sorry guys.......i need more time then i expected for the second part! i have to think and complete the story for the contest first and i hope i can do it really faster (most of the idea are settled in my mind!) and then i can move back on Phylia's adventure!
Just a thing.....if someone is interessed, i'm open for collaboration in this project, don't forget it!
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Take the time you need , but not too long ;D .
And give us a wonderfull work . ;)
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hope i can do it.......i have the next poll in mind, it's all about how to reach that point with the story line!
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No news, usually bring no bad news.......but it's not the same!
Sorry to all, but i don't have work on the second part of this story and you all can see why in my Lair.....i'm really sorry for the wait, but probably, soon, i can be able to put my hands on this strange adventure.......
My lair is taking all my free time and probably it will continue like this, plus there is the new contest....again!, but i think i have found a way to find some time and work on Phylia's journey.
i repeat, so sorry! :-[
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Take the time you need , but not too long ;D .
And give us a wonderfull work . ;)
Patricia, i'm making you wait so much but finally i'm working on the story! just started, but i'll try to do my best to complete it soon and post here
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Good evening, folks!
I know I know, this is a daaaamn old topic, but I got a pm who pushed me to give a look at this old project, so I take the decision to rework it a little.
And I had done it literally! The story posted is barely new, with more details (the Chronicles is a good platform to work on details), so now the first chapetr is now twice the old version.
Hope you want to give it a try!
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Its a lovely idea HB and your enthusiasm is commendable. I look forward to taking part. Keep up the good work.
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Well, at the moment I'm pondering about where and how to move Phylia after she woke up and proooobably, her adventure are going to run in the same places of Lady Dragon. But maaaybe, there can be surprise about them!
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As you had probably see, finally a new part of the journey is posted, so I think it's time to add some maaaaps!
The world
(http://orig11.deviantart.net/1f42/f/2015/162/4/e/the_world_of_elves_journey_by_hentaiboy77-d8wwq66.jpg)
http://hentaiboy77.deviantart.com/art/The-World-of-Elves-Journey-539004030
Everious' Forest
(http://pre11.deviantart.net/1606/th/pre/f/2015/139/e/b/everious__forest_by_hentaiboy77-d8tze82.jpg)
http://hentaiboy77.deviantart.com/art/Everious-Forest-534089666
City of Vailoon
(http://pre05.deviantart.net/2f0a/th/pre/f/2015/139/d/1/city_of_vailoon_by_hentaiboy77-d8tzfk3.jpg)
http://hentaiboy77.deviantart.com/art/City-of-Vailoon-534091395
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So what race of Elves are you playing, and can there be multiple races?
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Well, Phylia and Aily were living in a forest since they were child, sooooo.......anyway, this is just their village and around the Continent of Drakoonia there can be more! And Dark Elves, of course!
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Can I play too? only if nobody minds of course ...I dont want to upset any equilibrium. And ill keep a low key.
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Don't add comments.. add the story ;D
Hello fellow friends of AChat forum!
While thinking at the new chapter od Dragons' Chronicles, I restarted to work on this project too.
We left Phylia in a cellar with a scared girl who was punished......well, things are moving again! stay tuned!
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Hello fellows friend!
Due to some error I made, I was forced to reset the poll, so please, votwe again in the main story to chose Phylia nad Kath fate!
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Geez, poll is opened from 5 days and no one have voted or wrote a comment!? hurry up, go and do it here!
http://www.funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2132.0.html
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Hi,
Voted 8)
Thank you for votingm, Nat!
I quoted your reply and removed it from the story's thread to leave it more clean and easy to read!
Kisses and hugs, my sweet friends!
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Oh, don't forget to add here comment linked to your choice: possible suggestion for the story, new characters.......I'm open for them!
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The poll will stay for another week......hurry up, I need your help!
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I voted for the second and less popular choice. I want her to stand up to the soldier and not run away lol
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I can image it, Bee....it's in your nature! hugs and kisses!