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Title: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Richard_Wolf on May 28, 2013, 07:33:38 AM

She stood watching herself in the mirror as she swept the brush through her long thick auburn hair. It wasn't how she would act normally, ... normally ... that thought brought the hint of a smile to her lips. Her case already packed stood by the door. A strange feeling passed through her as she swept her hair up in to a pony tail and held it in place with a simple elasticated band. As she left her home, she turned to look at it one last time. Even now it didn't feel like home, it had never felt like home, even though she had lived there for her whole life it had never felt like home.
 
Now that she was leaving it all behind it didn't seem any different. She turned, thrusting one hand in to the pocket of the tan coloured trench coat she wore, her case rattled behind her but she wasn't hearing it. What she was hearing was his voice ... HIS ...voice. Again her pace slowed as she thought back to that fateful day. The day in question had started normally enough, until she had become bored and started looking at some of the chat sites she had used before.

 It was when she received an invite that the day changed so .... so dramatically. She had entered her chat name and then her password ... Normally that  was enough to enter the room ... Not on this occasion it hadn't. She had been presented with a list of questions and a disclaimer. Answering the questions was simple enough... Reading the disclaimer was another thing altogether. For some reason though she had agreed to abide by the disclaimer and ticked the box.... That was the moment her life had changed. She had walked in to an auction .... names and numbers flashed up on the screen: Peter2:- bids 223.... Han:- bids 345.... And so it had continued ....

Until the names stopped scrolling up the screen. Suddenly her  name appeared ... Angel has been won by ..... It caused her to blink and just stare at the image displayed on the chat room ... It was a list of instructions. Instructions she was now following. Some inner self preservation mechanism was telling her to run and not follow the instructions. Only some thing compelled her to do as  she  had been instructed, even down to the route out of the small town she was to take, the colour, the style of her clothes had been picked out for her.

It started raining. As she left the town outskirts the heavens opened on her. Cars of all makes raced past her, none stopping or even slowing down. As she walked she did wonder what he HE would look like. Would he ... HE .. be kind ... cruel ... Would HE be rich ... poor ... It struck her that HE would have to have money to enter in to the auction in the first place. She tried to summon up a mental image of him from what she had been told was enough to recognize HIM.... She shrugged and picked up her pace. Ahead a car sat in the lay-by. All she could tell of the car was it's colour ... White ... Not it's make until she got closer and realized it was a pure white BMW Z4 ... She didn't want to smile but suddenly she was starting to feel like a school girl, shy and giggly. That feeling lasted until the passenger door opened and HE got out of the Z4.

It was still raining, not as hard but ... The rain had darkened his coat, the hat he wore, wide brimmed was dark,  "Mmm .." she thought "... that fits ... "        I wasn't until she neared him that he spoke ... in a deep voice that compelled her to obey him. "Diane .. Leave your case I'll put it in the boot for you... " He had opened the door for her and as she climbed in she saw that he had smiled at her, her face flushed red, her hands nervously tried to push the safety belt in to the socket. Then the door closed and she felt as though she could breath again. She heard the thump of the trunk lid shutting then the drivers door opened and in he climbed. As he drove off he turned to look at her and a quick smile flashed across his face before he turned to give his full attention to  driving. It took only moments for the car to reach cruising speed. She tensed as his hand lifted from the gear stick to her leg.. She audibly gasped as his fingers curled under her leg and began to stroke he inner thigh slowly..... slowly she relaxed, parting her legs just a little "Good girl ... " His voice was deep, manly, firm ... It was as if he had just given her a command ... Her thoughts whirled at what he would feel like inside her, touching her, holding her... Dominating her, controlling her ... The way he was touching her inner thigh, the way he occasionally gave her slender toned thigh a squeeze spoke of possession, ownership of her even now, so soon after getting in to his car.

She blinked as the sudden glare of a security light blinded her momentarily. Suddenly there was silence but for the soft gentle thrumming of the rain on the car roof and the pulsating beat of her heart. Suddenly her head was turned. Finger tips ... HIS .. finger tips turned her so she looked in to his shadowed face. "We are here ... You are finally home my girl ..." Those words .... They made her shiver, feeling the spine tingling excitement run through her body from head to toe. He exited the car closing the door and she couldn't move ... Until he opened the door for her and spoke so quietly she barely heard his words "Out ... " He took hold of her hand, steadying her and suddenly he was holding her. Strong arms held her body a tight hold that threatened to stop her breathing ....


She woke, blinking her eyes as she looked around .. "Where am I ..." she thought .. Looking around the unfamiliar surroundings. It took her a few minutes to realize that she was naked, naked but covered in a warm comfortable bed. The canopy and the thick curtain are a rich deep  red,  almost the colour of blood, the four posts carved from some dark wood.  She rolled on to her side wondering how she had really ended up naked in a bed that wasn't her own, in house of a man she had not spoken more than a dozen words to. He had obviously undressed her... That very thought caused he cheeks to flush.

Then she heard ... sensed ... something. She sat up and looked down the bed and there HE was. Sat in a leather chair fingers steepled elbows resting on the arms. His legs crossed, left ankle resting on his right knee. A hint of a smile played across his lips as their eyes met. Not sure what she should do she lowered her eyes from his. He said nothing just watched her ... What did he want ... what should she do ... had she angered him already ... was she going to be punished if she did something wrong ....Fleeting thoughts rolled through her mind until she could barely think .... Slowly she lowered the quilt, then let it drop to the bed. Her instincts now took over her body. She moved like an automaton, stiffly, slowly, not wanting to look clumsy she took her time sliding from the bed, to the floor. She stood in front of him .. looking at the high polished shoes. Slowly she folded gracefully to her knees. With her hands folded she rested them on her bare thighs ... slowly .. so slowly she lifted her eyes to meet his piercing blue eyes.

He reached out, finger tips touching her cheek, just a light touch but enough that it sent a chill through her body, visably she shivered under his touch, his gaze. A firm voice soothed her tension. "Thank you, good girl Erin ... " His very words seemed to appear in her head, her eyes closed "Sir ... I am your's to command... " Slowly her head dropped, her arms lifted to rest both  her hands on his knee, crossed at the wrists "I am yours ... "  She sensed more than felt him move, hands that at once seemed strong, capable of inflicting pain, yet soothingly gentle as they stroked over her hair. Panic gripped her once more ... She hadn't checked her appearance ... her hair must be a tangled mess .... He was now holding her head, cradled in his hands she suddenly felt safe ..yet vulnerable ..her body trembled as he took control of her.

 As  he moved  one hand from her head she leaned, pressing her face in to his hand that still cradled her face. She closed her eyes, more lowering them waiting with her breath held and her heart suddenly beating like a drum. She knew what was coming ... then it was touching her flesh cool, subtle, unyielding ... slowly the leather encased her neck. As he fastened the buckle he spoke, that voice so deep and firm so commanding and yet gentle it shocked her to her core. "Now Erin ... now you are mine ... every breath you take, every beat of your heart every thought you have will be for me my Erin." He could feel her trembling, her tears puddled in the palm  of his hand.

The scent of her hair filled his nostrils as his lips touched first her hair, then as he lifted her head, his lips kissing her tears, he tasted her salt, touched her lips with his. Their first kiss was slow, just a breath of his lips on hers, then, ... then their lips met and he pulled her to his lips, pushing them apart with his tongue searching her mouth, exploring her slowly. He heard her moan, his fingers stroked her cheek and her collared throat. Bringing her closer as they kissed deeply, him holding her, she clutching his shirt holding on to him so tightly that she thought her fingers would have to be prized from him. She let out a slow breathless moan, longing for more of him. He kissed her more deeply, with more passion than she had felt before with any other man. By  mutual consent they broke from each other. Breathless smiles on both their faces as he sat back, she rocked back, her ass on her heels, hands folded in to her lap. Suddenly he rose from the chair, shakily she followed his move, rising to her feet and moving so she stood at his right, just behind him. She followed him to his  wardrobe. Once there she took a step back, instinctively giving him the room he needed. She could see him smiling in the mirror, see his eyes looking at her body through the silvered glass. It took only moments for him to turn to her, a silk shirt, pure white, his shorts ...

 "You'll wear these Erin ... I'm going to take a  shower ... And you my girl are going to make us both breakfast .. We'll eat in the kitchen... You will then have all day to familiarise yourself with your home before I get home from work. You may go outside.  "  As he spoke she took the two items of clothing she would be allowed to wear, waiting for him to finish speaking "Yes my Master ... " hesitantly she looked around the room ,.. Watching her, his eyes showed a slight amusement and as she turned slightly his hand landed on her bare ass with a soft slap of flesh on flesh, grinning he pointed to the door "That way my Erin ... " Seeing is grin  she smiled, still feeling the sting of his hand on her ass as she went towards the door. This time though it was her turn .. as she reached the door, clutching his clothes that she would wear to her chest, he bent forward, used her teeth to pull the door open and waggled her hips as she did so. She heard his laugh and grinned to herself.

For the first time in many years she felt the heaviness of her heart starting to lift. This what she wanted, this was something she could do, make him happy, she knew he would do the same for her. It was what she craved, all her life she had felt something was missing ...

 HIM ..and. HIS dominance .. 

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: stray on May 28, 2013, 08:04:17 AM

Oh emh, without some paragraph it's a bit difficult read it ^^

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Brandybee on May 28, 2013, 08:07:04 AM

Welcome, a new author is in the village   ;D  

Fantasic story..   Is it a short story and that is how you are leaving it?  for the reader to fill in their own story line?  I have to say, I hope not.. I am left wanting more ....  :P  and then some... ;D

May I give a tip to your presentation,  as you are aware, some readers do not have English as a first language  and even us natives speakers find it easier to read if you paragraph a couple of times, after say 5 or 6 lines.  This causes blocks of words.  

This stops us losing our place, especially as we scroll down to read more of your story.  It also looks better.

Try it, you will see what I mean.   ;D

I look forward to reading more and by the way ...   Dom or not ...   YOU ARE SO RECRUITED FOR EROTIC STORY CONTEST 5    ;D  ;D  ;D

Forum Home  Page / Organizations & Events / Contests /  EROTIC STORY CONTEST 5 OT
http://www.funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2378.0.html

Voting for the new theme stops soon,  then the authors will have a couple of months or so to write their masterpiece..   keep an eye out for the dates and rules to be published soon.   ;D

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Richard_Wolf on May 28, 2013, 08:17:34 AM

Been a few years since I did these kind of things so I will be making a fair few mistakes on the boards I think !!!!!

Quote from: Brandybee on May 28, 2013, 08:07:04 AM

I look forward to reading more and by the way ...   Dom or not ...   YOU ARE SO RECRUITED FOR EROTIC STORY CONTEST 5    ;D  ;D  ;D

Contest 5 ...Mmhmmm .. I will need an incentive ....

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Brandybee on May 28, 2013, 08:28:13 AM

 ;D

Mr Wolf...  cocking my head to one side,  I have a way with words that may just bore you into submission,  selling Forum, the contest and erotic stories is one of my favourite pass times ... 

and I have records to beat in Erotic Story Contest 5   ;D

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Richard_Wolf on May 28, 2013, 09:30:12 AM

"Beat what .... Ohh records ... damn ... Thought something else needed beating .... " Keeps a straight face .... (not)

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: sexilicious on May 28, 2013, 09:46:39 AM

very nice Richard and yeah better listen to Brandy ;) she has a way of twisting people's arms  ::)

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Richard_Wolf on May 28, 2013, 09:50:26 AM

Quote from: sexilicious on May 28, 2013, 09:46:39 AM

very nice Richard and yeah better listen to Brandy ;) she has a way of twisting people's arms  ::)

Whispers in sexilicious' ear "Shhhh ...Don't tell her but all she has to do is ask very nicely."

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Brandybee on May 28, 2013, 09:53:49 AM

You are recruited too Sexi   LMAO   ;D

Done,  " Wolfie,  Please do Forum the honour of writing a story for Erotic Story Contest  5  ....   you will no doubt pleasure our readers no end "   ;D

Offering you my sweetest smile, and puppy dog eyes,  (  but  my Bee sting tail is twitching like the Devil,  hidden from view behind me ... ;)  )

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: sexilicious on May 28, 2013, 09:56:08 AM

Well Brandy if it keeps going with where the topic will be, I most likely will write a story ;)

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Richard_Wolf on May 28, 2013, 09:57:38 AM

Makes a mental note to not to swat Brandy's ass ..... OK Ok ok .... goes to take a look at the contest subjects ...

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Brandybee on May 28, 2013, 10:03:21 AM

Yehaw,   that's 3  -  there's no backing out now, oh and jcm ... I see you in the background ...  You are recruited too  ;D    so 4    ;D

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: hentaiboy69 on May 28, 2013, 10:03:52 AM

Please, stop spamming in the story thread! it's not nice!

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Brandybee on May 28, 2013, 10:07:59 AM

HB,  of course , you are so right...    Did you notice you are included in my numbers above  :)  I havent forgot the PROMISE  ;D

Back to topic...   Great story.   I hope you continue further episodes here  ;D

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Richard_Wolf on May 28, 2013, 04:36:31 PM

Quote from: Brandybee on May 28, 2013, 09:53:49 AM

(  but  my Bee sting tail is twitching like the Devil,  hidden from view behind me ... ;)  )

I do have that effect on the Devil ... He twitches every time  our paths cross ...Ohh ... by the way I was wondering about that sting in your tail

(http://i1307.photobucket.com/albums/s583/matt0_20091/ponybuttplug_zpsc7af762e.jpg)

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Brandybee on May 29, 2013, 06:23:15 AM

Tea Spurt moment.....

Touche  Wolfie    ROFLMAO

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: hentaiboy69 on May 29, 2013, 07:00:47 AM

sorry for the OT, but.....0

not properly, Wolf......this is her sweeet sting!

(http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/9168/bgwip03.png)

now did you understand why we say she is dangerous!?

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Richard_Wolf on May 29, 2013, 08:02:49 AM

Wow ... never seen a butt plug that big HB ..

rofl at Brandy's post ....

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: old_goat on May 29, 2013, 08:25:27 AM

This story has a familiar ring to it.
Can't quite put my finger on it yet.
 ;D

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Brandybee on May 29, 2013, 08:29:46 AM

LOL... Its not in my butt baby,  think of it like a strap on wand that crackles at times, the strength determined by me ...   :-*

Back to topic ...  I think your fans may be waiting for more of ....   Collaring of Erin  ;D

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Richard_Wolf on May 29, 2013, 08:32:02 AM

Quote from: old_goat on May 29, 2013, 08:25:27 AM

This story has a familiar ring to it.
Can't quite put my finger on it yet.
 ;D

It isn't the first time I have posted this story to an erotic chat site ... So you may well have read it someplace. I'm wondering if we have met on one of those sites now ..
 

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: old_goat on May 29, 2013, 08:35:51 AM

Quote from: Richard_Wolf on May 29, 2013, 08:32:02 AM

Quote from: old_goat on May 29, 2013, 08:25:27 AM

This story has a familiar ring to it.
Can't quite put my finger on it yet.
 ;D

It isn't the first time I have posted this story to an erotic chat site ... So you may well have read it someplace. I'm wondering if we have met on one of those sites now ..
 

Could be that I have read your work.
Have been reading erotica for years.
This story is a good one.
 8)

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: sexilicious on May 29, 2013, 08:51:10 AM

well even if he has read it many others haven't Richard so please continue. Always love seeing a dom/sub relationship especially when the dom is one who is loving. Don't think there is any higher kind of hotness that i have found as of yet then spending time with my loving Master on the other site.

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Richard_Wolf on June 07, 2013, 04:57:31 PM

He had gone to work that day ... Gone after giving her the freedom of his .and now her home ... That thought brought a smile to her lips. She was hungry and needed a shower. She chose to shower first. It was a luxurious bathroom. She noticed there was no window, that was the first thing, her second thought was the mirror. One piece it covered the wall from floor to ceiling. The shower .. It looked more like a spa shower, all gold, the faucets lined the wall able to spray her whole body. She started to turn the shower on, warm water instantly dropped like warm rain from the shower head. As she stepped under it she looked up, running her hands over her long auburn hair right to the ends. When she blinked the water from her eyes ...

Her mouth dropped open ... They were obviously new but meant to match the gold pipe work of the shower. rings set in to the wall of the shower. She reached up and stood straighter, her fingers curled around one of the rings .. They looked like towel rings, large.. but towels would get soaked. two more sat higher ... one she could reach by standing on tip toes. He would have to lift her up to reach the third ring. She would shave, she decided, so she would be all clean and freshly shaven when he returned home from work. ... Her shampoo and conditioner were there, so was a brand new toothbrush. Where had her shaving things gone to.... "I was sure I had packed them ... " she mumbled to herself ...

It was sometime later when the phone rang. She picked it up answering with her name ... then her face lit up "Master .... " A sigh of relief that it been no one else. "My Erin ... Listen carefully. I'm bringing a friend home for dinner, he's important to my work so I have warned you in good time to cook something truely delishious ...I know there is enough food in the fridge. Ring me if you have problems and remember your training .. remember you are mine and make a good impression My Erin ... " Her heart beat faster at his words ... So soon ... she hadn't expected this on her first full day with her new owner ... "Yes my Master ...I won't let you down ... see you in a few hours my Master ... " She could almost see that faint smile play on his lips "See you soon pet ... Oh ... one other thing ... don't wear my shirt .. Just the white apron in the kitchen " Then he hung up ..

Her mind was in a panic now ... A few deep breaths ... She closed her eyes thinking "He bought me because I am right for him .. I know how to do this " she muttered to herself. Her eyes opened and then she set off walking to the kitchen. She lifted his shirt off over her body and slipped the apron on ... If he had been here she knew she could get him to tie the bow at the small of her back ... She started cooking, her gourmet cooking skills quickly putting her at ease.

Everything was ready, table set, house spotless ... there was just enough time to check her apparance and get to the door to await him and  his guest for the evening. Wearing only his shorts and the apron, she set the cushion by the door and knelt to await his return, his house shoes set to either side of her knees, just as she had been taught .. only this was real ... not some internet chat room...

The door opened and in he stepped, holding the door open for his guest, older and not as handsome she thought... He placed his left foot on hr thigh, silently she craved to tug the lace with her teeth... She untied the lace held his shoe so he could slip his foot out, then the other foot on her thigh ... She did the same again... "Thank you Erin my darling "His fingers teased her head up "This is Daniel Parker ... You will call him Sir .... "Yes my Master .... Good evening Sir, I am pleased to meet you ... " She rose gracefully to her feet, turning to follow the two men in to the dinning room "We'll eat now Erin .. "  At his  words she diverted herself to the kitchen.

She took plates from the fridge, assembling the food decoratively on the two plates ... Both exactly the same. She delivered them to the table. Her Master's gust first and then her Master. As taught she went and stood at her Master's left shoulder, back a pace as she had learned to do. There was little talk but she could tell there was a tension in the air .. She pleaded ... hoped it wasn't her fault.

After the first course had been consumed she repeated the process with the main course and coffee.  She was dismissed while they talked about the business that they had met to discuss. Later she was called back in to serve the first and last drink of the evening, each man now held a drink of whiskey and ginger. Her cushion was placed by her Masters left leg so she went to kneel there by his left knee as they talked about sport and family and the other things men would talk about. She listened to his voice, his words about him .....

The guest rose to his feet, then her Master stood. A slight touch to her head informed her to stay. She lowered her head to await his return. After 15 minutes he returned  to his seat and stroked her hair like his pet, like his pet she responded, moving her head slightly to his leg so he didn't have to stretch to reach her. His voice seemed so loud as he broke the silence "Tonight was a success, your cooking was wonderful ...." She thought she detected a but in there ... Instead his fingers tangled in her hair and pulled her head back. Suddenly his lips were on hers.. hungrily and all to quickly he removed his lips from her mouth, leaving her lips wet, mouth open and almost panting.....

"Stand ... remove that apron ... " his pointing finger indicated where she should stand. Facing him she reached behind hair and undid the ties then lifted the apron up over her head. Only his shorts  now covered her. Her breasts fully exposed to his view. She knew his yes roamed over her body, she knew she had pleased him and had a smile on her lips. Nervously she licked her lips "Tonight was supposed to be our first night together ... For springing this on you so soon ... You haven't had time to settle in yet I know that ... Yet you have done  so much and done it so well ....I have to say that I didn't expect so much from you. "  .. He had leaned back so he could look in to her lowered eyes. While she did keep her head lowered her eyes looked i to his as sh spoke "Thank you my Master ... I... I wanted tonight to be a success ..For you Master .. " Her soft smile showed how happy she was at his words. How easily he could make  her smile, make her happy as she had hoped she would.     

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: sexilicious on June 07, 2013, 05:33:25 PM

mmmmmmmmm be nice to have such a loving Master like that ;D would snuggle into his hands every time. Keep posting the story Richard you do MARVELOUS

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Brandybee on June 07, 2013, 06:09:08 PM

Yes, echoing Sexi -  please keep  posting the story.  Its a great read.   :P

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Richard_Wolf on June 07, 2013, 06:23:00 PM

THE END ......

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: sexilicious on June 07, 2013, 06:27:18 PM

WHAT!!!! no keep going Richard. don't make me seduce you to get more hot stories ;)

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Richard_Wolf on June 11, 2013, 05:37:37 AM

oh ....okayyy then ...lol

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: sexilicious on June 11, 2013, 05:44:12 AM

YAY MORE STORY :) so when you posting it huh huh huh *nudges Richard*

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Brandybee on June 11, 2013, 04:14:24 PM

Polishing your fountain pen,  filling it with ink,  waving it under your nose .... I'm with Sexi   and jcm ....   we want ... more    ;D

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: Richard_Wolf on June 11, 2013, 05:22:09 PM

I'm going seeing Moody Blues in concert tomorrow Wednesday .... So will have to wait until I get back from that

Title: Re: Collaring of Erin
Post by: All_for_you on June 11, 2013, 09:10:32 PM

WOW
Mr Wolf
What can I say,
What a great read can't wait to read then next chapter