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Title: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on July 12, 2014, 03:49:06 AM
It's been a while since i wrote this story.......almoust two years, i think, but recently, i had start to give it new life.

And the first step was to edit a little what i wrote and post in the "A tale of erotic fantasy" because i wasn't fully satisfed by it! And here it come.....the adventure re-start at last and while i'm posting here the new first part, i'm still working on the third one.
That will mean you gonna see soon the second, probably next saturday, hope i can have the third ready for a week later and start to write the fourth.....or it's what i hope, to give you new chapter closed one to the other, but we all know....plans don't usually goes as we want, so....let's see!

And now, let's the adventure begin......again! Enjoy!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on July 15, 2014, 01:36:41 AM
Morning all, my friends!

While working on third part of chapter 1, i was pondering about adding here some stuff i made regarding the whole story, so here we go!

The map of the land where the whole story will move its step
(http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2014/035/e/8/land_map_wip_by_hentaiboy77-d6wumgf.jpg)

And the City of Libidinis, next place to visit!
(http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/339/3/d/libidinis_by_hentaiboy77-d6wupqa.jpg)

And last, but don't least, the main characters!
(http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2012/173/6/8/dragon_lady___concept_2_by_hentaiboy77-d54bnh4.jpg)

Of course, this are all WIP but usefull for me to have a clear idea of the area where my story is moving! And there will be more to add even if i'm not sure about to use in the timeline i'm creating......this, fro example:

Land of the Ancient Winged
(http://imageshack.us/a/img12/5050/1ymn.jpg)

and i can swear you i have programmed a line to follow for a max of 8 parts, divided in 2 chapters! I don't know how long it will take to write, but i'll try to go on with it when i can, so please....support me in this project! see you all soon!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: Peeka on July 15, 2014, 09:39:42 AM
I love to see story happening in a fantasy world.

Can't wait to see the destiny of this strange unusual sweet cute creature.
Happy Hargus isn't just a brute as it first seemed.  ;)
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on July 15, 2014, 10:34:55 AM
Indeed, he isn't.......well, not always, anyway! few days and next part will be on, Peeka.....

Aaaaand, yes, i love fantasy worlds in general so....why not create an erotic story in it!? Pretty elves girl, cat girls......and demon, of course!  ;)
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on July 19, 2014, 04:10:33 AM
Aaaaaaand done! here we go with the second part! The third isn't ready but i'm at half of it, more or less, so this mean the forth will take more time to be out here in forum.....sorry for it!


Now.....hope you enjoy!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: Peeka on July 19, 2014, 05:08:34 AM
Just... mmmh!  :P

She is so sensible. I would loveonce to see her power and rage in fight, must be devastating and so much contrasting.

But, please, give us her name!! Let Horgus shout it out loud or whisper it in her ear, pretty please!  ;)
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on July 19, 2014, 06:26:56 AM
be patient.......something gonna happend in a week or so! the next part is a big surprise, trust me!

and Peeka......thanks for your comments!  :-*
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: FoxyRoxxy on July 19, 2014, 10:28:06 AM
Love what you are creating here in your story  can you add me in it HB

I want to  be a  assassin warrior  I want pointy ears  like Spock or a elf

I sure would love it and some healing powers  fight for the weak

steal from the rich and give to the poor  please pleas   :)
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on July 20, 2014, 04:09:20 AM
mmmmmm.......never had think about a possibility like this, Roxxy, but this doesen't mean it's impossible to do.....let's see!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: tangoracer on July 21, 2014, 11:43:26 AM
MMWAHHHHHH     My Love HB

Wow  never stop writing  my love its great 

I can't wait for the next chapter

Will she win the tournament :)  and marry her Love Horgus and gain her freedom

your number 1 fan always   Tango   MMWAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: FoxyRoxxy on July 22, 2014, 12:36:13 AM
Well HB I would love it if you add me 
in your story  please add Lover to  :D

lol this will be so cool  I would love  it .. ;D
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on July 22, 2014, 06:38:32 AM
About introducing Lover.......Roxxy,. go here and read the fifth post.

http://www.funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,947.30.html

Was made by Lover, introducing him in the "A tale of erotic fantasy". that's the place were all start!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: Brandybee on July 22, 2014, 05:10:52 PM
I'm glad you are doing this HB, I enjoyed  "A tale of Erotic Fantasy"  and being part of it later on.  I may still revive it in part too.

Keep up the good work.
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on July 23, 2014, 04:03:25 AM
It will be nice if you do it, Brandy......as the Stories Contest Manager i expect some good work from you!  ;)

and yes, i'm happy too......it was long time i want to rework on my Lady dragon and i'd wait too long before ding it! but now, she's here again.....i'm proud of her!

and last but don't least......Tango, you always support me...thanks a lot! You make me very happy!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on July 23, 2014, 04:11:07 AM
@Roxxy: hope to catch you around on AChat or on the square........need to talk you about your request!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: FoxyRoxxy on July 24, 2014, 02:29:13 PM
Thank you HB  easy pleace to  fined me is here in the Forum  :)
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on July 26, 2014, 03:45:34 AM
Morning all, Achat friends!

Was planning to add the new part today, but lack of time during the week, had forced me to posticipate it.....sigh!
But i'll promise you to add it soon as possible! Have fate!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on August 01, 2014, 10:22:44 AM
Aaaand here we go!

The third part is now ready, a very titanic work for me......less time plus writing abut something i never had try to do before, really takes time and mental strenght but at last, it's done! Of course, real life always try to be in the middle, but it's the rule, we all know that....oh, well!

It just need a second read, to be sure it's allright and to see if i have to change or adding something, then it will be posted, maybe tonight or maybe after the weekend, i can't tell you exactly at the moment....

So, just stay tuned and wait!"
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on August 01, 2014, 02:00:53 PM
Ok....time to post it! Enjoy this different chapter......or is what i hope!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on August 07, 2014, 04:09:42 PM
No new line to add to my story, but something that can help you to follow the travel of our heroine! The newest and almost completed version of the maps of the two cities Lady had visited!

(http://orig02.deviantart.net/94f4/f/2015/135/5/c/city_of_rhoonas_by_hentaiboy77-d7u5kcx.jpg)
http://hentaiboy77.deviantart.com/art/City-of-Rhoonas-473911377

(http://orig07.deviantart.net/e47e/f/2015/135/e/2/libidinis_by_hentaiboy77-d6wupqa.jpg)
http://hentaiboy77.deviantart.com/art/Libidinis-417977794

and last but not least, the map of the whole are!

(http://orig07.deviantart.net/c0c1/f/2015/162/7/a/the_world_of_dragons__chronicles_by_hentaiboy77-d7x8l2m.jpg)
http://hentaiboy77.deviantart.com/gallery/47038428/Stories-concept


Edit:
Done some work and now they surely look a little better........hope you like!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: Bear on August 08, 2014, 08:04:07 AM
Well done HB...you have put a lot of time and effort into this project and it shows. I am looking forward to the continued installments of your story.
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on August 08, 2014, 08:28:42 AM
Thanks, my friend....and yes, i put lot of time to do them and i think they came out nice! But there is another one ready that i'm going to show you only when time will come, so be patiente.

And here, a small guide on how i realized them:


The entire process was long a day and a little more, but i think it looks good.....hope you all agree!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: FoxyRoxxy on August 08, 2014, 12:50:22 PM
Remarkable HB

I really Like all that you  doing to this story Line  I wish you all the best ...
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: Lover on August 08, 2014, 03:01:50 PM
Congrats HB. Seeing it, I remember when we started it. Nice memories :) I like your enthusiasm
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on August 09, 2014, 05:26:05 AM
Thanks to both.......and i agree with you, Lover, this project brings nice memories back, memories of a far away past!

I wish i have more time to work on the story, but you know......real life always want its attention, so i'll do it when i can. Stay tuned for more update!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: Peeka on August 09, 2014, 08:07:35 AM
AAAAWWW !!
I wanted to see her rage...but not with Horgus dying. Poor her! Snif!

Very nice ship battle and emotions you describe there. Loved it!!!

And about these maps, nicely detailed and gives good idea of the places.
Maybe you could add some points and legends pointing at the places where some important events happen during the story?

Like "x : here arrived the ship wreck, "x" here was the ship attacked, "x" here was Horgus burried, "x" here is where she lost her mother and hid,... just the important events appearing as the story goes on.

Keep on!!!  ;)
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on August 09, 2014, 08:23:41 AM
I told you in the square........ "a twist will happen in the next part" and here it is, in all its might and despair. Aaaand yes, with this chapter, things are going to change for Lady, how they change, i can't tell you!

About the legend....i was thinking at something similar, but i passed on the idea but being sure to add on the maps the places where she had some action. For example, there is the Lord Barton estate marked in Rhoonas, the place where she met Horgus, and others, like the tavern where she will taken after her arrive in Libidinis (and where next chapter will start)....and more can be added, who know!

Stay tuned for news!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: Bear on August 09, 2014, 09:55:47 AM
When I need a idea HB.... I slip on the headsets and listen to Two Steps from Hell...

A little epic music tends to help sorting thru the clutter of thoughts.

Two Steps From Hell... "Protectors of the Earth"222
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ASj81daun5Q

"Heart of Courage"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XYKUeZQbMF0


Find your muse my friend...
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: Brandybee on August 09, 2014, 10:02:58 AM
I have finally caught up. Your story is exciting and intriguing and I felt the loss of  Horgus.

The maps of the city are truely amazing HB.

Cant wait for you to write more and the plans you realise to bring it to life.

I am a fan, but you knew that already  :-*

Well done. Your hard work is paying off.

@ Bear -  Stone is right. I think its your turn for Talon.
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on August 09, 2014, 10:25:20 AM
Quote from: Brandybee on August 09, 2014, 10:02:58 AM
@ Bear -  Stone is right. I think its your turn for Talon.

Say what!?   :o


@Bear: when i need an idea, recently i like to put on Lindsy Stirling, with her Skyrim song or Phantom of the Opera (this one, is perfect for thrilling moment!)

Skyrim
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BSLPH9d-jsI&list=UUyC_4jvPzLiSkJkLIkA7B8g

Phantom of the Opera
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TCL94-MsxYc&list=UUyC_4jvPzLiSkJkLIkA7B8g

aaaanyway, still working on the fourth part.......hope to post it soon!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: jayc on August 09, 2014, 12:43:53 PM
Love the maps too HB,  love stories with maps   :)

an ambitious project   i speak for many when i say well done and we demand MORE :D
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on August 10, 2014, 03:26:09 AM
Thank you so much, Jayc....yes, i know it's a lot of work to do, but i like it!as i said, it will take me more time then how i want to write it, but i'll try my best....

Now, looking back at other project i started as the Interactive Story http://www.funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2132.0.html or the Project Genensis http://www.funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,1960.0.html, i can say i would like to goes on with them too, but this Chronicles is what i wish to work a lot, focusing on trying to do a good job with it, so all the others have to wait, that's it.

Aaaaanyway, i'll be happy if someone want to try and do the interactive one in my place......really! Just let me know, if you are interessed in it!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on August 20, 2014, 08:34:58 AM
Hello and good afternoon, dear readers! i know i know, you want story's line to read not comment.....weeeellllll.....they will come soon, i promise! i post this to let you know i'm not dead and even this thread isn't, so just have a little more patiente, please!

Aaaaanyway, i want to tell you again how much i'm happy to see Bear's character moving his steps again in the city of Libidinis! Hope more will follow him!  :D
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on August 20, 2014, 03:16:43 PM
The new chapter is becoming very long (14  pages and still going on), so i decide to split it and post a first part. enjoy it!

Aaaand, maybe, there can be a surprise soon......who know!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on August 26, 2014, 06:19:11 AM
Here we are.......another part finished! Hope it's hot enough for you till the point it makes the wait for the next one easy to hold. And i wonder if the writers of the "A tale of erotic fantasy" can find the character of Colette interessing enough to use her for something.

And now, after a week or so from the post, i can finally reveal you all a thing: Xenia, the sweet elf girl of the flower, it's a character i study for a friend of the forum, coordinating it with Lover. Probably, you understand who i am talking about....Roxxy! I want to thanks her for the appretation she showed me with a private message and i hope the readers had find her pretty and gentle.

A last word......get ready for more surprises!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: Stone on August 26, 2014, 04:03:14 PM
I am a big fan HB.   Enjoying your story very much.  Please keep it coming.
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on August 30, 2014, 06:15:51 AM
I'm working on it, don't worry Stone! i have something ready to post but still waiting for an aswer from Bear and the other writers of the Tale, just hope i can have it soon!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on September 09, 2014, 01:12:33 AM
Morning from italy, my dear AChat forum friends! Wish you all a wonderful new day!

And now, back to business. I'm working on the new part of the chronicles and i hope it can be ready soon, but meanwhile, i want to tell you something i forget: with the Lycans interlude, the intro of the Dragon Lady chapter is finished, at last, and with the next part, we officially enter in chapter 2 of this saga. New characters, new adventure and, i hope, lot of steamy encouter!

Are you ready to jump in my mind and enjoy the story!? I hope you all are.....  ;D
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on September 20, 2014, 02:58:57 AM
looking around at DeviantArt, i found this amazing pics of a city realized around a giant dragon skeleton. I wonder if i can use it someway in my story.....who knows!

(http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/260/4/d/dragon_city_by_kwiatek14-d7zbu78.png)
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: Bear on October 13, 2014, 08:34:41 AM
That is an inspiring image HB... hope you find a way to work it in.
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: Lover on October 13, 2014, 09:24:20 AM
Interesting pic hb :)
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on October 14, 2014, 10:43:04 AM
@Bear: i hope it too!

@Lover: DeviantArt is a site of artists where it's possible to find lot of inspiring pics! Take a look at it!


Then, let's go back on track with a request i'd like to make, first to the other authors of tale, and a second for everyone:


any suggestion is welcomed!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: Brandybee on October 14, 2014, 11:20:07 AM
dragon of earth: male   -   SOIYCER
dragon of air: female   -    FLUEESEI
dragon of water: female -  HYDEESEI
dragon of fire: male      -   FLABEICER
dragon of life: male      -    BREABER

 
Continent of  Saxadi

PS  love your maps too  xxx
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on October 23, 2014, 02:36:18 AM
fast as usual, Bee! thank youuuuuuuuu! But i need to think about those name, i'm not sure of them andm, anyway, i don't need them for the moment, so it's early for a final decision.

Meanwhile i'm going on with the chapter about the tournament and i'm introducing some elements i need to talk with the tale's Writers, so soon i'll gonna ask them.

A last note......i'm planning to post this whole story on another site (not Literotica) named Hentaifoundry and where i use my usual nick Hentaiboy77. This will mean i must probably repost here it too, cause i'm planning to add something at the begin of the story. Stay tuned and you will see it soon!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on November 09, 2014, 07:37:23 AM
aaand here we go! The tournament begin and new friends are arriving.......hope i can post soon her first match!

As you can see i edited the whole story tto adjust some part of it, so i have to replace the line i wrote in the fantasy tail too.....how booooring! but needed!   :P
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on November 21, 2014, 02:03:55 AM
Hello fellow forum users! Just a quick message to let you know about a short hiatus this story will have, till this year end. The reason!? extra work to do at home and a little side project I wish to realize before Christmas or, at last!, for the end of the year!

Stay tuned!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on November 27, 2014, 02:46:35 PM
aaaand here we comes! while I'm working on my little idea for the end of the year, I found good inspiration to complete the part of the tournament and start the next one. YAHOOOOO!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on December 16, 2014, 10:58:16 AM
No news for the Chronicles, but I swear you all I'm working on it, even if at the moment I'm focused on something else.

To kill the wait for the  next chapter, I'm asking you all:

- What did you think it's goint to happen, after the first day of the tournament!?

Anyone can post his thoughts and when the new chapter will be out, let's see wgho is the winner!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on January 28, 2015, 02:18:39 AM
aaaand here we go! After long time, the adventure of Lady are running again! Sorry for the wait, but Rhua request lot of attention while I was writing her experience, sooooo........but now Lady is back and after the tournament she's very down, poor girl!

aaaanyway, let's see what happen next!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on April 09, 2015, 01:49:27 PM
Scrap.......it's nearby 3 months I don't post new stuff about the Chronicle.....  :'(
But don't worry, new material is on the way, even if it's coming out reaaaally slow!  (thanks Rhua for this.....damn girl!  >:( )

Aaaaanyway, while I'm working to complete the chapter, I'm working on new character who will be introduced in the next chapter, probably! So, I was thinking to introduce a first rough sketch of her to you all!

So, please.....let's welcome Karina Alexandrowna, youngest member of the city guards!

(http://orig08.deviantart.net/0299/f/2016/078/d/6/karina__kitty__alexandrowna_by_hentaiboy77-d9vn80h.jpg)

This is a fast sketch of her I made mixing several parts of my girl, using paints. It's not a perfect work, but I'm quite sure she can be very interesting at last!
Btw....on the right shoulder plate, there is the small dragon I'm using as logo of the Chronicles and I was pondering to make it the blason of Libidinis or, at last of the city guards! so, I'd like to know if the other Authors of the tale have something to say about it!

Opinion & comment are welcome!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: Brandybee on April 09, 2015, 01:58:42 PM
Thats a good sketch HB, I like the idea of her.  Well done.

The badge or emblem  is a great idea.  Do it.   ;D
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on April 10, 2015, 01:12:25 AM
Thank you so much, Bee, as usual you Always support me! *kiss*

About the emblem, I really would like to use it as the one of the city......it can offer me an idea for the far future of the story!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on April 15, 2015, 07:04:26 AM
New characters are on the the working table and at last the chapter is finished and posted, while a new one is on the way.........Lady is baaaack!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: Amethyst on April 25, 2015, 09:38:18 AM
Extremely talented Writer ..... I hope I can get as good ... top work
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on April 25, 2015, 11:19:39 AM
Thank you , Amethyst! I'm trying my best to make this story interesting and a nice read.....hope I have done it well!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on May 04, 2015, 03:32:35 AM
Question time, here!

While I'm working to the new chapter (dunno when it will be ready), I had done some modify on the first two, making the whole story a page longer, so I'll going to re-post all the story, cause I had found several error I fixed.

Meanwhile, I was pondering about a thing: if I have to rework everything in third person (with out linking it with the tale) or leave it in first. Opinion!?
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on May 09, 2015, 06:25:25 AM
Aaaand here we go!

Little by little, word after word, at last my Chronicles had reached page n. 100! YAYYYYYY!

Meanwhile I'm working to complete it, I'll give you a little taste of the content of tha page! Wish you all a happy reading!


"“Good morning to you, Karina! And please....don’t be so formal, I’m not one of your superiors!” I tell her, trying to create a most pleasant atmosphere between us “And call me just Lady, as everyone do!”

Despite my words, the girl didn’t appears interested in changing her approach to me. She’s looking straight at me, manteining a certain distance and patiently waiting for something, as if she’s waiting for some orders or something similar. Looking at her not so friendly attitude, I take a deep breath, then I speak to her.

“I think we have to start our investigation examining the reports of the last days....did you think is it possible!?”

“Of course, Milady! But we must go the main barrack to read them!” she replies, till staring a t me.

“Very well! Then, let’s move out!”

During the short way which separate the Almaan’s Mansion from the main barrack of the City’s Guards, Karina didn’t spill a word, a clear sign of how difficult this collaboration between us is going to be. Judging by the first impression she gave to me and on the way she’s acting right now, I can presume she’s even more suspicious about me than how Mardukas was till the first moment I arrived in Libidinis. And once we are inside the barrack, Karina appears even more formal than when we were walking along the street, especially we she talks with other members of the Guards or just when we some of cross them in the corridors.
Anyway, after two hours passed reading the impressive amount of reports written in the last four days, weren’t able to collect some interesting informations which can give us a starting point, with the exception of fact that the Guards had found a rope with a hook outside the arena which was probably used by the assassin to escape from there. So, at last, we both agree to ask if we can examinate it, in hope to find some traces on it which can help us in moving a first step forward in our difficult and long research.
But again, even this object didn’t offer any concrete clue to us, except a feeble scent I can sense from it. But that scent isn’s enough strong to let me recognize it, so we are again at the starting point, exactly as we were just before coming to the barrack. Not being able to discover any trace which can give us a direction to follow, even if it can be small, is frustrating and it’s starting to discourage us little but. Of course, we are far away to be readyo to give up in our task. Anyway, we take the decision to have a break and have some lunch, just to going back to our work after it with a recharged spirit. And which place is better than a tavern to enjoy a nice meal!? And we both know the right place where we can go to have a little break.

Once we step in the “Silver Horn”, I immediately notice Colette looking at me from the opposite side of the room. As usual, the tavern is full of men who didn’t want to lose any chance to enter in Colette’s graces, but when they all notice us, the place suddenly become quiet: maybe it was me or because of Karina, but the three men which were talking to Colette at one of the tables, immediately change the subject of their conversation, probably to avoid any possible trouble with a member of the City’s Guards.
Colette, which was now looking particularly happy to have both of us here in her tavern, leads us to a more isolated table, were we can eat without being disturbed by the other costumers. Then, she disappear in the kitchen, leaving us alone, but not before she brings to us a jar of fresh water and a smallest one with some red wine."


Hope I can complete it soon!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: Brandybee on May 09, 2015, 12:07:56 PM
HB, you tease. Love your story. Hope I  get chance to work on mine again soon. Well done mate.

Quote from: hentaiboy69 on May 04, 2015, 03:32:35 AM
Question time, here!

While I'm working to the new chapter (dunno when it will be ready), I had done some modify on the first two, making the whole story a page longer, so I'll going to re-post all the story, cause I had found several error I fixed.

Meanwhile, I was pondering about a thing: if I have to rework everything in third person (with out linking it with the tale) or leave it in first. Opinion!?


I would say use write your story first person only because of the link with the fantasy tale. Readers can then read it as a linked story and it was what you started the story in.  It would be a shame to break off the link now with the fantasy tale I think.
However in saying that, you are the author and you write it in what you think works best and what inspires your creativity.
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on May 10, 2015, 04:26:45 AM
thanks for your nice words and suggestions, Bee......you really do you best to support your writer!  *kisses and hugs*

About an old question I wrote time ago on the tale O.T. thread, I think I'm going to post the interlude only here.....so, decision is taken for that too!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on May 15, 2015, 09:50:12 AM
Aaaand done! all the Chronicles updated.........what a hell of a work!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on May 20, 2015, 02:27:08 AM
I'm posting it here, but it's something linked with the Elves Journey story

http://www.funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2132.msg124659.html#msg124659

and with two more of my old project.

As the one of you which are following the Chronicles had noticed, here appear different characters from different stories I wrote and I'm writing. Well, at last I had take a decision about all of them and it's about to create a certain time continuity between all this stories.

At the moment, I'm still elaborating it, but I think I can show it in the early afternoon, so be patient and wait for the surprise!

Enjoy!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: Amethyst on May 20, 2015, 12:39:56 PM
I think your fantasy stories are amazing .. they have so much detail and really paint pictures . I don't write Fantasies about elves and strange kingdoms but I hope to write aswell as you do one day .. Keep up the excellent writing :)

P.S I think you should write a book , their are plenty of people out there old and young who love this typew of stuff :)
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on May 20, 2015, 01:58:30 PM
Thanks again for the nice comment, Amethyst!

Writing a book......I don't think I'm good enough to do it, anyway, not in English! But thanks for the encouraging!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on July 07, 2015, 05:57:58 AM
Aaaand here we go! The chapter "The Dragoness and the Kitty" is finally complete and it reach the goal of 112 pages!

Now, it's time to write a new interlude about Lycans, then I'll go back working on the Elves Journey.....geeez, the life of a writer is really full!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: Brandybee on July 10, 2015, 02:15:18 AM
psst, you sure its not a book already ...   hugs

keep up the good work HB,   i need to pull my finger out..  you are leaving me way behind.
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on July 10, 2015, 02:33:23 AM
pssst, Brandy.....don't say it too loud, but "Lady Dragon" is just the begin of the Chronicles!

btw, BB........there is something I want to talk with you about the Chronicles....stay tuned!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on February 17, 2016, 10:34:41 AM
Hello fellow users of AChat forum!

As the oldest members have probably niotice, something happened to my Chronicles!
Today I started to repost it here due to some fix I made here and there, but - ahi ahi! - during lunch break I was able to repost just half of it.
Hopefully, I'll complete the process this evening, probably even adding some few lines of the new chapter.

Meanwhile, I wiorked (and completed) a side project of the Chronicles which I'll gonna post here. Plus, I wrote an interlude I'll gonna use in the far future, for Voluume II of the story! Oh my........
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on February 17, 2016, 03:24:26 PM
Aaaaand.......done!

The whole story is back and there is even something new!

See you next, gladiators!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on April 06, 2016, 06:06:02 AM
Update:

changed the order of the last chapter and of the second interlude, so now any chapter is formed by 4 parts!

bad news is I'm stucked on how to make a certain event happen.....hope I can find a solution soon!  sigh!
Title: Re: DRAGONS’ CHRONICLES - OT
Post by: hentaiboy69 on July 12, 2019, 05:47:46 AM
Been so long since I posted here the last time (both this thread than the forum), but I assure you all I'm still alive.

Can't say the same of this project, wich is now on yatus for almost 2 or maybe 3 years. Aaaaanyway.....

Day ago I seen this art piece and whant to share it with all my good friends of Libidinis:

(https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/575ad3ee-5d86-473c-885e-9dd1a44bb950/dd62eiw-25c95434-7736-42b1-814e-34a96752a109.jpg/v1/fill/w_1600,h_1015,q_75,strp/sao_lous___environment_design_for_xor_veil_by_nimphradora_dd62eiw-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MTAxNSIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzU3NWFkM2VlLTVkODYtNDczYy04ODVlLTlkZDFhNDRiYjk1MFwvZGQ2MmVpdy0yNWM5NTQzNC03NzM2LTQyYjEtODE0ZS0zNGE5Njc1MmExMDkuanBnIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTE2MDAifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.slx9OWMdZx6_BVUCLhOyQqNlXFMDMKfwf1biOS6BY3A)

isn't it perfect?