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Discussions about sex => Artist's Alley => Topic started by: Anatasia97 on August 23, 2016, 02:03:21 AM

Title: World Of Wonders
Post by: Anatasia97 on August 23, 2016, 02:03:21 AM
I would Like to start a new Thread here, where I will post orignal poems and or creative writings. I hope it is allowed to start HERE in this section.

My first post is one I wrote a few days ago and posted in my introduction thread. :


Walking in a World of Wonders;

I could tell you all my story, Its one I'm sure,you have heard.
But, is my story true? Do you believe a word?

It's all about a girl, lost in a sea of confusion.
It's all about a girl, living in a life of illusion.

She walks though life, and as she wonders,
so many things in her head, she often ponders!

what would her life have been? if she had not been born a boy,
and had not been raised to be a man!

when she was younger she always knew, deep inside and as she grew.
a mistake had been made, Knowing deep inside, there was nothing she could do!

As time went by, and as she grow, she learned of things, she never knew!
She learned that she was not alone, with this feeling deep down that she didn't belong!

A whole new world opened before her eyes, a world she found, she could shed her disguise!
finally, a world where she could be free, to live as the girl she know she should be!
 
So, that is my story, and yes it's true! weather or not you believe it, is up to you!

(http://imagizer.imageshack.us/v2/1600x1200q90/922/Lm06p8.jpg)
Title: Re: World Of Wonders
Post by: cassianna on August 23, 2016, 03:07:36 AM
Hiiiii

Very good Anatasia!

Welcome and I feel very happy about can enjoy your posts in a really "World of Wonders". I think everybody waiting more posts soon!

A big kiss!  :)
Title: Re: World Of Wonders
Post by: Lydiarose on August 23, 2016, 03:21:40 AM
Welcome Anatasia you are in right place now kisses
Title: Re: World Of Wonders
Post by: Lover on August 23, 2016, 09:00:09 AM
Love it :) Just continue Ana!
Title: Re: World Of Wonders
Post by: Ian1964 on August 23, 2016, 12:57:51 PM
Wow Ana
I couldn't have said that better myself.
You have a talent and you should use it more!!

Ian
Title: Re: World Of Wonders
Post by: Brandybee on August 23, 2016, 06:05:27 PM
A beautiful sentiment, written from the heart.

It made me teary eyed.

Title: Re: World Of Wonders
Post by: BillyBlueeye on August 25, 2016, 02:46:57 PM
Dear Anatasia,
I love your topic, your story and more than all your poem!

I am looking forward to read more
Title: Re: World Of Wonders
Post by: Nat33 on August 29, 2016, 03:24:15 AM
I like and like that I can learn english with not too long lessons  ;D

Well done Ana, kisses.
Title: Re: World Of Wonders
Post by: twiztedsoul on August 31, 2016, 12:21:42 PM
OMG  Ana you made me cry, I love you my dear dear friend, just taking a break, you will be forever in my heart hun
Vikkee is just too much for me to take and when fun is affecting your health its no longer fun.
Love you
*lisa*
Title: Re: World Of Wonders
Post by: BillyBlueeye on September 01, 2016, 01:35:27 AM
I always enjoy to visit the moon, where you and your sisters live  ;)
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Post by: Laura_AFS on September 01, 2016, 03:21:24 AM
Your words are so nice Ana...they go so deep and touch my heart.
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Post by: zuzannah on September 01, 2016, 05:54:47 AM
  *Kisses* Ana.

  That one made me smile.  Hehehe.
Title: Re: World Of Wonders
Post by: cassianna on September 04, 2016, 09:01:18 AM
Hi Anatasia

Congratulations for your topic and thankyou very much to share with us your poems, words and feellings.

I did a long journey to  enter in your World of Wonders and I want bak here many times.

I will leave for you a image  from my adventure in your world wonders.

Kisses All

(http://i.imgur.com/Gp46k5C.jpg)
Title: Re: World Of Wonders
Post by: cassianna on September 07, 2016, 04:54:17 PM
Walking in a World of Wonders;


As I walk along a lonely street here in my hometown, I happened upon and Alley I have never ventured down.
As I look around I see, signs for shops. as I wonder through I stop at each place and window shop.

Each window is different as to what can be seem. Shops full of artworks, and Artists dreams!
I see a garage door at the end of the street, And a sign on the door, that looks very neat.

Silver Blonde Garage it's what it reads, Come inside for all your design needs.
There is no window for me to look through, So I step inside, and there I meet you.

With hair of silver, and a beautiful smile, your legs so long they seen to go on for over a mile.
I look in wonder at the artworks I see, your talent is amazing it is clear to see.

I look and I look,  and with each piece I find, your talent is so special, it just blows my mind.
In this would of wonders, one thing is true, The world is much brighter, since I met you!

Cassianna's Silver Blonde Garage, If the truth be told.
is a true world of wonders, that never gets old!


Cassiaan you are a true wonder, and I cherish our friendship more then you will ever know!

Oh My God, Anatasia!!!
Thankyou very much, much much!!!!! I loved all , I loved each word!!!!
 I will make it the main text of Siver Blonde Garage!
I will put it in the first page, in the cover garage post!
thankyou very much !!!!!!! Kisses Kisses Kisses!!!

You are the real world of  Wonders!!!

(http://i.imgur.com/zYcImiU.gif)


... and Kisses kisses Kisses!!!! more kisses!!!

Kisses All!!!!
:)

(http://i.imgur.com/tRuqBP2.gif)


Title: Re: World Of Wonders
Post by: Brandybee on September 11, 2016, 03:11:28 PM
A new poet in our midst.   ;D

Please post more of your inspirations and reflections.  They are great to read.
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Post by: Hope4U on September 11, 2016, 09:04:58 PM
Beautiful job Ana
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Post by: Lover on September 12, 2016, 01:24:20 AM
Ana, why do you want to remove this topic?
Title: Re: World Of Wonders
Post by: tangoracer on September 12, 2016, 12:58:41 PM
Ana my sweet I hope you don't mind me posting on your great thread.

We all come into this world
With a scream and a cry

We all get kissed and cuddled
With a loving hands

We all try to do our best
With a hopeful smile

We all do what we can
With a good intention

We all have deep sleeps
With a nice dream

We all try to find love
With an open heart

We all die in the end
With a final breath

We all are missed
With a sad heavy heart

We all must carry on
With a new hope

We all must never forget
With a happy memory

We all must never give up
With a hope of true love
Title: Re: World Of Wonders
Post by: zuzannah on September 24, 2016, 04:52:35 PM
  Omg Ana,  those pics are Awesome   :-* :-* :-* :-*

  We're soooooooooo   Cute.    *Giggles*    :D :D :D :D
Title: Re: World Of Wonders
Post by: Lydiarose on September 30, 2016, 08:42:11 AM
love it Anatasia
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Post by: Kaitlyn1989 on September 30, 2016, 01:29:55 PM
(http://i.imgur.com/8nTPz0D.gif)

BRAVO Ana, Bravo ....... Very GOOD, I really like this one ALOT


Shhhhh, Don't tell anyone but I'm kinda a LYDIA "Groupie" too *giggles*

Keep writing girlfriend, I LOVE reading.

*hug n kisses* your friend Kaitlyn

PS, Ana, please delete this post after you have read. I do not want to hide your writing with my praises. I just had to do this one publicly.  Andrea always tells me it is better to BEG for FORGIVNESS, than ASK for permission.  *giggles* Begs for Forgiveness.

Title: Re: World Of Wonders
Post by: Laura_AFS on October 08, 2016, 03:06:53 PM

Does anyone care?

I do.

I don't know what happened, but you told your friend, and thats accurate.
You always were straight about it, lord knows you were, so please, please, don't leave that place here.

You would terribly be missed, not only by me, I know many of us would feel very, very empty.
I may not be an artist with words, like you always have been, but i hope you think it through again, and go on living your dream.

So i come to an end with my horrible written open letter,
and i hope you will be around to teach me to write better.

Laura


 
Title: Re: World Of Wonders
Post by: BillyBlueeye on October 09, 2016, 11:17:51 AM
Hopefully you can keep your feelings and your lover for ever.
Everyone needs to save a piece of heaven in his heart.