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Welcome, a new author is in the village
Fantasic story.. Is it a short story and that is how you are leaving it? for the reader to fill in their own story line? I have to say, I hope not.. I am left wanting more ….
and then some… May I give a tip to your presentation, as you are aware, some readers do not have English as a first language and even us natives speakers find it easier to read if you paragraph a couple of times, after say 5 or 6 lines. This causes blocks of words.
This stops us losing our place, especially as we scroll down to read more of your story. It also looks better.
Try it, you will see what I mean.
I look forward to reading more and by the way … Dom or not … YOU ARE SO RECRUITED FOR EROTIC STORY CONTEST 5
Forum Home Page / Organizations & Events / Contests / EROTIC STORY CONTEST 5 OT
https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2378.0.htmlVoting for the new theme stops soon, then the authors will have a couple of months or so to write their masterpiece.. keep an eye out for the dates and rules to be published soon.
Been a few years since I did these kind of things so I will be making a fair few mistakes on the boards I think !!!!!
I look forward to reading more and by the way … Dom or not … YOU ARE SO RECRUITED FOR EROTIC STORY CONTEST 5
Contest 5 …Mmhmmm .. I will need an incentive ….
Mr Wolf… cocking my head to one side, I have a way with words that may just bore you into submission, selling Forum, the contest and erotic stories is one of my favourite pass times …
and I have records to beat in Erotic Story Contest 5
very nice Richard and yeah better listen to Brandy
she has a way of twisting people's arms :very nice Richard and yeah better listen to Brandy
she has a way of twisting people's arms :Whispers in sexilicious' ear “Shhhh …Don't tell her but all she has to do is ask very nicely.”
You are recruited too Sexi LMAO
Done, ” Wolfie, Please do Forum the honour of writing a story for Erotic Story Contest 5 …. you will no doubt pleasure our readers no end ”
Offering you my sweetest smile, and puppy dog eyes, ( but my Bee sting tail is twitching like the Devil, hidden from view behind me …
)Well Brandy if it keeps going with where the topic will be, I most likely will write a story
Yehaw, that's 3 – there's no backing out now, oh and jcm … I see you in the background … You are recruited too
so 4 HB, of course , you are so right… Did you notice you are included in my numbers above
I havent forgot the PROMISE Back to topic… Great story. I hope you continue further episodes here
( but my Bee sting tail is twitching like the Devil, hidden from view behind me …
)I do have that effect on the Devil … He twitches every time our paths cross …Ohh … by the way I was wondering about that sting in your tail
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