Hey Petra, Good first time effort in writing a short story. I know your first language is not English and am extremely impressed you have found the courage and confidence to publish here in our forum village.
It is a hot MILF story and great idea. I'm sure will it be appreciated by the younger guys here hehe. Others too.
I hope you continue to write stories and read the other stories here to pick up on the English grammar and phrasing.
Lover is German and speaks excellent English if you need help and of course I will help out too.
I would like you to consider entering in our next Erotic Story Contest 8. We are discussing themes at the moment.
Please let us know your suggestions.
Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests > EROTIC STORY CONTEST 8 – O.T. https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,3231.0.html
I would also encourage you to read the current Erotic Story Contest 7 stories and vote for your favourite.
1 . It shows support for our authors and contest and 2. Reading will assist your English and phrasing.
Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests > ” JOURNEY ” THE STORIES. EROTIC STORY CONTEST 7. https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,3232.0.html
Our other contest stories are listed in this topic –
Forum Home Page > Discussions about sex > Erotic Stories > Directions to EROTIC STORY CONTEST Stories, past & present.
https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2730.0.html
Good luck. Hope to read more from you.
Here's the Erotic story Contest rules for you to look over.
Forum Home Page > Organizations & Events > Contests > EROTIC STORY CONTEST RULES. https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2509.0.html