Bobbler has a certain point. Even in my old Pool Party I started out getting naked and giving the atmosphere a sexual tone to it right away. The advantage is you can have as many extras as your want to start getting sexual with. Right now you that sexuality isn't there, but as always just my A$.02.
sorry to rain on your parade. here's how i see it:
A) the section is called “erotic fantasies”. to me what you have here is “sing songs around the campfire”. i know you went to a lot of trouble setting up the whole scenario as your first post was extremely well done. but maybe you need to tweak it to give it a more sexual angle that being said, the idea of sex in the woods is appealing to me. i actually had an idea as to how to proceed here and who i would participate with C) and…i waited 2 days to post anything to see if anyone joined in and no one had…so maybe others are perceiving this thread as i am…?
i hope you can see i was joking a bit with my first post. i will delete both of these posts if you want to continue this as it is…and if you get any participants
and YIKES! janine agreeing with me lately on 2 different things?!? what *is* this world coming to