Dick obsession

[TightFit74]

very nice Suzanna..

I think you should enter a story into the contest elsewhere on the forum..

[Brandybee]

Hi  susana4love,  I second what Tight says – you should enter the erotic story contest 3 Time Travel.

Check out the below for details, see what you think.    Hope you do.  I really enjoyed your story.

Forum Homepage / Organisations and Events / Contests /  Erotic Story contest –  TIME TRAVEL a contest for erotic stories 3

[ThunderSax]

I think it was wonderful. It should be sumbitted. Is this your first try at a story?

[mercer78]

Very well written 

[sm3369]

Hi Susana,

I loved the story. You definitely need to enter into the contest. Clearly, you have a talent for this.

[Kingdustin]

I secant that motion, if you haven't all ready. it was well written, can easily feel your passion as you type it out. would like to read more.
as a writer my self. Little tip. try using word that flow little more. personally I would use breast instead of tits. Penis instead cock. I find that it flows much better this why.IMO of course. 

[Momma_andrea]

Oh …My…GOD….

BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO. excellently done.  You made me adore his penis too.

[sandra001]

mmmmmm i adore  all dick too

[freddie]

my compliments susana…ty for that smile

[toby2233]

Su,

I loved your story and it aroused me. Please enter the contest becauise your  writing is beautiful.

Love,

Toby2233

[zoerink]

I clap my hands for you su

Your words travel along the net, i can feel each of them into my hear, over my skin, and feel your breath so close my ear while i read it.

Kisses

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