This is great news Andrea! Congrats for you feedback and also for the brave to send it to Literotica. We love for being you part of our community and I just can say: Go on
congrats on you story be posted at literotica.com, for those who have not visited the site its great place to get your erotic story fix with new stories posted daily.
I was re-reading the more romantic parts of this story, so I had to give it a bump. (yes, I re-read my stuff all the time.) I'm narcissistic that way.
“This is your collar, my sweet. This is the bond between us. I promise my care and my love, my guidance and my hand.” Tears welled up in my eyes. ‘He was MY knight, he was!’ my heart screamed. “Do you accept my gift and my demands?” Steve finished. “I do, Master.” I said aloud. The clerk may have heard but I really didn’t care. He clasped the choker and turned me and I threw myself on him hugging his neck and then kissing him deeply. Steve held me and kissed me back. He even dipped me there in Denver Diamonds & jewelry. But I’m sure they see that kind of stuff every day.