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  • November 14, 2012 at 2:05 pm #60804
    hentaiboy69
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      mmmh, there are some problem if i rework my story a little!? i wasn't satisfed with part of it and i'd like to try ans adjust it! of course, the i will post it in the story area

      November 14, 2012 at 2:38 pm #60805
      Lover
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        Are you talking about your story in the 2nd contest? Of couse you may rework it and post in the story area.

        November 14, 2012 at 3:24 pm #60803
        hentaiboy69
        Participant

          Yes, i'm talking about it, my “Summer games” story! i'd like to rework the central scene cause at last i think i had write it missing more details in it…..the meeting, the game…..and at last the erotic scene!

          November 14, 2012 at 7:43 pm #60806
          Brandybee
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            If you are thinking about it,  you should.  I look forward to reading it  :)

            November 14, 2012 at 8:41 pm #60807
            hentaiboy69
            Participant

              I'm thinking about it…i wasn't satisfy about how i end it till the moment i had send the story to Tight! Of course, i'm not sure it will be better then how it's now, but i want to try anyway!

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