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STORY CONTEST COUNTDOWN IS ON
2 DAYS TILL THE DEADLINEDEADLINE is 7pm (UK time) HALLOWEEN Mon 31 OCT 2016.
Hurry hurry. Get those fabulous erotic stories / poems to me by PM in Forum.
GOOD LUCK.
Last minute check –
1. Make sure the theme is covered … what are your opposites that attract ?
2. Is your Achat component covered – Out of the shop – a room; an outfit ; a background ?To fit the rules, the achat component needs to be a room, or an outfit or a background to cleverly slip into the story and described in enough detail for the reader to recognise.
They are fun to hide in the story and fun to find.Here is one of the best examples I have
Jayc's Adraste's Gift in Contest 6. Although you only need one component, the way he incorporates 3 – the Skeletons ; Flaming Skull and Flaming dragon backgrounds is quite ingenious. He has great inventive skill and imagination. See the below quote.
Quote from Adraste's Gift :
The Norseman needed her attention now and was delirious in the days and nights to come. She fed him broth and water in his semi wake moments. She soothed and bathed his sweat soaked body and trimmed his beard and moustache and nails. She cared for him, in between doing her chores, and she settled into a new routine around him.
Aluric ran through the surf, running for his life.
White skeletons chased him and were gaining ground. The sand under his feet glowed like embers, his feet burned but he ran on. Familiar voices called his name with forlorn sorrow.
Hiding in the tall grass, out of breath he looked up. The moon was a flaming skull which bellowed his name, the sound shook the ground.
The sea vanished and Aluric was on a dark plain with a flame in the distance. He ran, images of his life flashed before him like bolts of lightning.
He found himself standing in front of Yggdrasil, the ash tree of the world. And guarding it was Nidhogg the Dragon who fed on the wicked. The dragon was of orange flames, spitting fire in the pitch black. Then he opened his right talon to reveal the shining sun, opening its left talon it revealed the stars and the moon.
“Valhalla awaits you Aluric but this is not the time” Nidhogg hissed.
The Dragon's chest swelled with a mighty breath, then exhaled, engulfing Aluric in flames and sent him back to the living.
She awoke that dawn and checked on the Norseman. The night before he was near death. She had done all she could for him and expected the worse. Lighting a lamp, she was surprised to find him sleeping peacefully. She touched his forehead, he was still feverish but the color in his skin was coming back. There was hope for him, he was through the worst…
3. To present your story in the format required, You will also have to send by 1 post or if need be split your story into 2 posts and forward it to me via PM here in readiness to be published for voting.
Each post holds 20,000 characters including spaces (about 3,000 words ish )I will need a resume at the beginning of the story completed :
Title :
Pages: —-
Words:
Characters (with Spaces):
Included Components: (What outfit / room / background)
Please also describe briefly the story's theme and the opposite:
GOOD LUCK TO ALL YOU AUTHORS & BUDDING AUTHORS.
about time my jets won jets 24 —- ravens 16
poor brandy lolBlows a Raspberry LOL – Well played Fisher.
OMG Coves! Lover! Bad bad boys!
I must be barmy but… Hell yeah bring it on.
But for me to be naked will cost you both the price of the next new outfit or pose or room.
ROFLMAO
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3 DAYS TILL THE DEADLINEDEADLINE is 7pm (UK time) HALLOWEEN Mon 31 OCT 2016.
Hurry hurry. Get those fabulous erotic stories / poems to me by PM in Forum.
GOOD LUCK.
Last minute check –
1. Make sure the theme is covered … what are your opposites that attract ?
2. Is your Achat component covered – Out of the shop – a room; an outfit ; a background ?To fit the rules, the achat component needs to be a room, or an outfit or a background to cleverly slip into the story and described in enough detail for the reader to recognise.
They are fun to hide in the story and fun to find.Here is one of the best examples I have
Jayc's Adraste's Gift in Contest 6. Although you only need one component, the way he incorporates 3 – the Skeletons ; Flaming Skull and Flaming dragon backgrounds is quite ingenious. He has great inventive skill and imagination. See the below quote.
Quote from Adraste's Gift :
The Norseman needed her attention now and was delirious in the days and nights to come. She fed him broth and water in his semi wake moments. She soothed and bathed his sweat soaked body and trimmed his beard and moustache and nails. She cared for him, in between doing her chores, and she settled into a new routine around him.
Aluric ran through the surf, running for his life.
White skeletons chased him and were gaining ground. The sand under his feet glowed like embers, his feet burned but he ran on. Familiar voices called his name with forlorn sorrow.
Hiding in the tall grass, out of breath he looked up. The moon was a flaming skull which bellowed his name, the sound shook the ground.
The sea vanished and Aluric was on a dark plain with a flame in the distance. He ran, images of his life flashed before him like bolts of lightning.
He found himself standing in front of Yggdrasil, the ash tree of the world. And guarding it was Nidhogg the Dragon who fed on the wicked. The dragon was of orange flames, spitting fire in the pitch black. Then he opened his right talon to reveal the shining sun, opening its left talon it revealed the stars and the moon.
“Valhalla awaits you Aluric but this is not the time” Nidhogg hissed.
The Dragon's chest swelled with a mighty breath, then exhaled, engulfing Aluric in flames and sent him back to the living.
She awoke that dawn and checked on the Norseman. The night before he was near death. She had done all she could for him and expected the worse. Lighting a lamp, she was surprised to find him sleeping peacefully. She touched his forehead, he was still feverish but the color in his skin was coming back. There was hope for him, he was through the worst…
3. To present your story in the format required, You will also have to send by 1 post or if need be split your story into 2 posts and forward it to me via PM here in readiness to be published for voting.
Each post holds 20,000 characters including spaces (about 3,000 words ish )I will need a resume at the beginning of the story completed :
Title :
Pages: —-
Words:
Characters (with Spaces):
Included Components: (What outfit / room / background)
Please also describe briefly the story's theme and the opposite:
GOOD LUCK TO ALL YOU AUTHORS & BUDDING AUTHORS.
LOVER & COVEMS.
I'll adopt the Falcons for this game
Sunday, Oct. 30 2016 Packers Lover & Covems at Falcons
If I win , you both wear this for 3 days with the cow boots
BANNER ” Happy Halloween. Get your free tricks here “
STORY CONTEST COUNTDOWN IS ON
5 DAYS TILL THE DEADLINEDEADLINE is 7pm (UK time) HALLOWEEN Mon 31 OCT 2016.
Hurry hurry. Get those fabulous erotic stories / poems to me by PM in Forum.
GOOD LUCK.
Last minute check –
1. Make sure the theme is covered … what are your opposites that attract ?
2. Is your Achat component covered – Out of the shop – a room; an outfit ; a background ?To fit the rules, the achat component needs to be a room, or an outfit or a background to cleverly slip into the story and described in enough detail for the reader to recognise.
They are fun to hide in the story and fun to find.Here is one of the best examples I have
Jayc's Adraste's Gift in Contest 6. Although you only need one component, the way he incorporates 3 – the Skeletons ; Flaming Skull and Flaming dragon backgrounds is quite ingenious. He has great inventive skill and imagination. See the below quote.
Quote from Adraste's Gift :
The Norseman needed her attention now and was delirious in the days and nights to come. She fed him broth and water in his semi wake moments. She soothed and bathed his sweat soaked body and trimmed his beard and moustache and nails. She cared for him, in between doing her chores, and she settled into a new routine around him.
Aluric ran through the surf, running for his life.
White skeletons chased him and were gaining ground. The sand under his feet glowed like embers, his feet burned but he ran on. Familiar voices called his name with forlorn sorrow.
Hiding in the tall grass, out of breath he looked up. The moon was a flaming skull which bellowed his name, the sound shook the ground.
The sea vanished and Aluric was on a dark plain with a flame in the distance. He ran, images of his life flashed before him like bolts of lightning.
He found himself standing in front of Yggdrasil, the ash tree of the world. And guarding it was Nidhogg the Dragon who fed on the wicked. The dragon was of orange flames, spitting fire in the pitch black. Then he opened his right talon to reveal the shining sun, opening its left talon it revealed the stars and the moon.
“Valhalla awaits you Aluric but this is not the time” Nidhogg hissed.
The Dragon's chest swelled with a mighty breath, then exhaled, engulfing Aluric in flames and sent him back to the living.
She awoke that dawn and checked on the Norseman. The night before he was near death. She had done all she could for him and expected the worse. Lighting a lamp, she was surprised to find him sleeping peacefully. She touched his forehead, he was still feverish but the color in his skin was coming back. There was hope for him, he was through the worst…
3. To present your story in the format required, You will also have to send by 1 post or if need be split your story into 2 posts and forward it to me via PM here in readiness to be published for voting.
Each post holds 20,000 characters including spaces (about 3,000 words ish )I will need a resume at the beginning of the story completed :
Title :
Pages: —-
Words:
Characters (with Spaces):
Included Components: (What outfit / room / background)
Please also describe briefly the story's theme and the opposite:
GOOD LUCK TO ALL YOU AUTHORS & BUDDING AUTHORS.
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