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Forum Homepage / Organisations & Events / Contests / EROTIC STORY CONTEST 4. ” FIRST TIME ” THE RULES https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2196.0.html
4. Only one story per contestant.
Above link show the rules & format submission of the Story Contests , although of course the relevant dates will be changed etc…
It also shows a further explanation of rule 4 to clarify co-writers involvement.Basically if you are involved in another story in a greater capacity than discussing, time, day, date, location, names of charachters.. then you are colluding in that story & offering ideas and will be excluded from submitting any other story to the competition.
Hope that answers your questions.
Yes, the theme is currently being voted for as we speak, see above for the choices.. and please vote

There are other rules too which will be very similar to Contest 4 . Please see below :-
Forum Homepage / Organisations & Events / Contests / EROTIC STORY CONTEST 4. ” FIRST TIME ” THE RULES https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2196.0.html
The themes usually have very wide scopes so to give as much creativity as possible to the authors .. It will be discussed again here when the final vote is counted.

HB, of course , you are so right… Did you notice you are included in my numbers above
I havent forgot the PROMISE 
Back to topic… Great story. I hope you continue further episodes here

Yehaw, that's 3 – there's no backing out now, oh and jcm … I see you in the background … You are recruited too
so 4 
Name change completed. Welcome to Artists Alley

You are recruited too Sexi LMAO

Done, ” Wolfie, Please do Forum the honour of writing a story for Erotic Story Contest 5 …. you will no doubt pleasure our readers no end ”

Offering you my sweetest smile, and puppy dog eyes, ( but my Bee sting tail is twitching like the Devil, hidden from view behind me …
)Chuckling … oh on the contrary I love a good growl grrr mmmm … usually of the Bear variety

Little Reds Riding did very well in a previous contest too with our members .. go see
Forum Homepage / Organizations & Events / Contests / “Time Travel”. THE STORIES. EROTIC STORY CONTEST 3
https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2049.15.htmlDid I mention , I want a story off you for Contest 5 …

I'm rather drawn to that Angel with the tilted and slightly tarnished halo in her hand …
I cant imagine why 
Would it be possible to give her browny / red hair and the writing in a deep blood red … bit like my cowgirl pic ?
Love your designs.
As this is now a gallery in our Forum village, would you like to choose a suitable title to show off your wares and I or one of the other moderators will gladly change your Topic Title Header…
Perhaps something like … Wolfie's Signatures & Banners …

Cool, Is she you in Cocks & Roses , rocking that guitar ?
Love the pic HB

Sitting in my Queen Bee costume that HB has designed for me, I chat with Lover teasing him about the Sign he held up for Marilyn in the Blind Date commercial… ligging all sneaky like in the background “ Hello Marilyn “ when I notice a new comer arrive in his smart suit and highly polished shoes.
There is a presence and air of authority about him for sure. I wonder vaguely if he may be a new owner of one of the dungeons downstairs in The Ice House. I must remember to ask Bear and Tangoracer when I get chance.
Old Joe serves him and I signal to him the drink is free. All new comers have a free drink on the house – it’s kind of traditional now.
I wonder what he may look like in a wolf costume, seeing as it’s a “ Furry Party “ night and chuckle at the thought.
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I wander over to him and welcome him to the AB&G. He smiles and I gently break the news to him …
“ I have just entered you for the fun run obstacle course, I bet you look great in goggles & flippers “
The devil in my angel eyes dances merrily away and I order yet another drink on …. Covems tab.


Mr Wolf… cocking my head to one side, I have a way with words that may just bore you into submission, selling Forum, the contest and erotic stories is one of my favourite pass times …
and I have records to beat in Erotic Story Contest 5

Welcome, a new author is in the village
Fantasic story.. Is it a short story and that is how you are leaving it? for the reader to fill in their own story line? I have to say, I hope not.. I am left wanting more ….
and then some… 
May I give a tip to your presentation, as you are aware, some readers do not have English as a first language and even us natives speakers find it easier to read if you paragraph a couple of times, after say 5 or 6 lines. This causes blocks of words.
This stops us losing our place, especially as we scroll down to read more of your story. It also looks better.
Try it, you will see what I mean.

I look forward to reading more and by the way … Dom or not … YOU ARE SO RECRUITED FOR EROTIC STORY CONTEST 5

Forum Home Page / Organizations & Events / Contests / EROTIC STORY CONTEST 5 OT
https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2378.0.htmlVoting for the new theme stops soon, then the authors will have a couple of months or so to write their masterpiece.. keep an eye out for the dates and rules to be published soon.

Sitting at the bar, I drink my House punch watching Lover in amazement as he begins to dress up in goggles, and flippers and the brightest beach shorts over his black panther trousers ever..
JD has the stop watch and he is given the count down for the fastest circuit round the bar. Lover has to jump over and negotiate a few well placed chairs and slip under some tables in the make shift obstacle course.
And he’s off… He guzzles down a pint of fine German lager, turns round 3 times, helped by Old_goat & King Dustin spinning him before making sure he is running in the right direction for his fast fun run to cheers around the bar. JD is keeping the time checks.
Satoire and Pafe are causing a stir as money is slapped on the table for her to complete a bear- assed run on the same course. Even Covems tears himself from his shoulder flirting with ItsAmy123 to slap down some money.
I giggle to Old_Joe as Lover lurches under a table, crawling on all fours determined to set a good time. Old Joe is pleased with himself as he has managed to get Grandma Tango’s phone number and will no doubt be paying her a visit in the near future.
He mentions running short of bar towels and beer mats and I shout over the crowd, that I have some promotion ones in the office of the new band “ Cocks & Roses” in the office. I will get them as soon as Stray is feeling better. She’s in there just gathering her faculties as the alcoholic drink, she had had, had gone to her teetotal head a little too quickly for her comfort.
Old Joe nods and tells me there’s no immediate rush but he will need them soon.
I see Stray exit the office and go next door into the new Massage room. She is going to join MrsexLover and Sexilious in there. She seems to have an excited look on her face, not uncommon here in the good old AB&G. 😮
I stand to go and collect the requested Cock & Roses beer mats from the office but Jayc & Stone beat me too it. They enter the office. I decide to leave them alone for some quality time. They may need it with all the kissing they keep doing. :

I pick up a pen from the bar and go to the notice board, chewing on the end as I look at the newly posted volunteer list for the Bar Olympics, just about to start with Lover . Cheekily, I add a few names for JD to call up in the timed Fast Run round the bar ….. underneath Lover.. I add …
Old_Goat, jcm0824, King Dustin, Pafe, Satoire, Covems, Its Amy123…..
Then I see jcm and a new girl – SnowBunny82 coming out from behind the curtain by the stage. Jcm has a very satisfied smile on his face. She must have discovered his Scottish ancestry I smile to myself and of course ..add her name to the list…
SnowBunny82…
Still chuckling to myself , I know that list will grow as the night goes on.
Freddie & tangojane dance and then he sings a beautiful song to her on stage. He has a fantastic voice and as we all clap him, tangojane runs to him and they snog robustly. He takes her in his arms and walks her backwards to a nearby table. They are lost in each other and care little as they begin to fondle each other quite openly . I wink at Old Joe , just another night at the bar and going strong…
I walk back to the bar to get a refill of punch, when the large drop down screen begins to flicker to life. Jayc and Stone must be putting the TV on in the office..
Suddenly a very amateurish commercial begins to play that they had apparently been working on with Covems and the Dwarfs to advertise their Blind Date Event. I am crying with laughter at the pandemonium on set. There’s stumbles, and Pachi farting , and smouldering dressing gowns and Lover in the background holding a sign up for Marilyn… it’s all so funny its genius.Everyone is watching , even Lover has stopped mid run to see what’s happening on the screen, quite forgetting he’s being timed.
The footage flickers to the end and then Stone and Jayc exit the office . We all cheer & clap them for their fine performances. The perplexed look on their faces is just as funny as they obviously have no idea their commercial had been broadcast to the rest of the bar.
I go to my now empty office and collect the promotional beermats and bar towels for the “ Cocks & Roses “ band along with the poster to say they are playing soon at the AB&G.
I glance to the one-way mirror showing the Spa Room next door, and then purposely walk over to gaze through it more. I see the troilism of Mrsexlover, Sexilicious and Stray enjoying each other in the spa pool. All are naked and wet in the pool. Mr sexlover is in heaven as the two ladies are licking his massive cock as he holds and fondles their heads on him. Its very hot & very erotic.

I watch for a while with interest and then return to the bar , locking my office door. I pass the “ Cocks & Roses” goodies on to a grateful Old Joe. He places the mats on the bar counter and I go hang up the “ Cocks & Roses” poster for all to see on the notice board.
Tangoracer & HB move to the Spa room and enter to join, Mrsexlover, Sexilicious, & Stray.
I sit with Lsdj, Kristina82, jcm0824, SnowBunny82, Jayc, Stone & Lover again at the bar. I offer to buy the next round of drinks, greet the two newcomers to the party – Kristina82 and SnowBunny82- and watch with interest who takes to dressing in the goggles & flippers for the fast run circuit round the bar obstacle course…….
Congrats Prias on another design release. Your bikinis are amazing. I bought the blue one

If you get an answer from the Achat Gods about the changes in your designs before release, please share them with us.
I am presuming that the changes were not discussed with you before it happened and was as much a surprise to you as us.
This happened in one of Jeanona's designs too, I was disappointed a black velvet classy look body suit was changed to a leather kink look. Either worked but I was hoping for the classy look as I already had leather in my wardrobe. I wanted to wear it in place of a ball gown with his tux, seeing as there are no long dress mapsa as yet.
I'm not sure how we can get round this except by communication with the Achat designers. Perhaps make a centre piece design to show off here in your boutique and then samples of the colours you have for your fans to express their views, then make it in the popular colour or colours.
Prias, I know you do ask your fans already too & I think each design can be very time consuming.It seems that the designers here are working so hard at their labels, then to have it changed without notification or some form of communication as to why, can leave them feeling a little disillusioned.
Can we have a bit more communication with our designers, please Achat Gods. There is wonderful talent here, It would be ashame to lose it.
Prias, keep up the great work, your talent is amazing.
I really like your designs. Its always lovely to see new talent.
The only thing I would like to say, and its only my opinion, as a regular on Forum .. I prefer and really like the thin signatures like Stray has now and a number of our other members.
If signatures are too big, I do find it off putting as I am reading and checking out members views & ideas. It sort of distracts from something which may well be an important point a member is trying to make.
Is it possible to keep your designs to a thin oblong like Stray's or am I in the minority here?

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