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Amethyst
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« : February 24, 2015, 07:50:46 AM »

   "Kindred Spirit" (Lyrics by Cindy Lauper)

If you think you're hearing something
And you can't think what it is
If you feel a quiet longing
Lift your heart into the wind
There you'll find my kindred spirit
There you'll meet me as a friend
It is just a kindred feeling
And a song to let you in...


Just to clarify All of the work here on my post is my own work ...that is with the exception of the above ' Kindred Spirit ' ..this is actually a b side track of Cyndi Lauper which I adore ....and went on to use the nick Kindred Spirit ....I am known as SweetCaress and also as ' Torn ' ...thanks :-)


Travels far and Wide By Amethyst aka SweetCaress . 

I often close my eyes travelling far and wide
to a land where my imagination begins to come alive
the colours so clear and perfect , the scenes as plain as day
Imagination being but a thought away

A young Indian Girl with eyes as the darkest night
not afraid of the wilderness that surrounds her
learned early to hunt and fight
her clothes are symbols of her tribe
her paint reflects her stance
while her elegance and fury create an hypnotic dance
golden flames from her fire , burn until the dawn
her soul like the wildest wind there wherever to have blown
wolves howling in the distance letting other animals know
they occupy this territory thats blanketed by snow
she hears their distant cries , alert and wide awake
standing as a guard , beside the frozen lake
she doesn't feel the cold air , that you and I would feel
for she lives in my imagination , where pain is never real x


My Chest By Amethyst

Souls on fire, passions entwined
The love I sought, the love I'll find
Plans I'll make without mistake,
The love she craves, she wont forsake
Each step I'll make , I'll make with thee
Bound by love, tied in matrimony
A promise of my soul I give
To hear her, breathe her , makes me live
Plans unfold as a blossom grows,
Her tiny hands , her button nose
Smiles are shared, a family made
Melodies of life,once more are played
Looking on wistfully, her beauty grows
Soon to be another's rose
She'll take his hand and say 'I do'
Her love so fine , so pure, so true
My time has passed, my job is done
Kept her safe , from all things wrong
Memories safe within my heart
A treasured locket that's set apart
Upon my chest ,I bare the crest
This circle of life has made its nest.


Silhouette By Amethyst

The sun above begins to set,
Against two shadows of silhouette
upon the beach they sit so free
gazing out across the sea
in the distance some seagulls fly
engulf the freedom of the sky
she rests her head upon his chest
wishing this could be her permanent nest
the waves slowly begin to leave the shore
sounds like they whisper as they gently flow
contentedly locked within his arms
she surrenders all thoughts to his loving charms xxx
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« #1 : February 24, 2015, 08:59:52 AM »

I like these. My favorite is "My Chest". Good work. :)
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« #2 : February 24, 2015, 09:12:21 AM »

Very  nice Amethyst

Having a  illnesses  dose not stop any one  from  achieving our  dreams &  inspirations
the only thing that stops us is not going for it that's what is the only Illnesses that prevent's
us .

Keep posting I like your writing  ..


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« #3 : February 24, 2015, 09:23:11 AM »

Very  nice Amethyst

Having a  illnesses  dose not stop any one  from  achieving our  dreams &  inspirations
the only thing that stops us is not going for it that's what is the only Illnesses that prevent's
us .


I dont see it as an illness ... just as a blessing and a gift ...
Keep posting I like your writing  ..
 
. thank you Roxy :) I wil


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« #4 : February 24, 2015, 10:01:32 AM »

Just beautiful, Amethyst.
Makes me want to hear more.
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« #5 : February 24, 2015, 10:04:44 AM »

Congrats Amethyst, you can be very proud! They all are wonderful, I can feel the love and your heart. Very beautiful :) My fav is Travels far and Wide

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I dont see it as an illness ... just as a blessing and a gift ...
Yes! You're absolutely right and it's the best way to see it.

Keep on writing please

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« #6 : February 24, 2015, 11:37:49 AM »

Thank you ..I will ..its nice to know someone likes them as they are very dear to me ... *smiles*
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« #7 : February 24, 2015, 11:38:45 AM »

thank you Hungrybear :-)
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« #8 : February 24, 2015, 11:42:23 AM »

I love your writing. Its all very beautiful. Every single one is my favourite.

Thank you for sharing it here in Forum.

Have you thought of publishing on Literotica too and widen your audience?  :)


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« #9 : February 24, 2015, 11:48:08 AM »

Thank you Brandy ...no not heard of it before ?
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« #10 : February 24, 2015, 12:06:03 PM »

Forum Home Page > Announcements > Forum News > Talented Writers in Achat's Forum - you betch ya! :)
http://www.funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2668.0.html

It has a non-erotic poem section. I have one posted there myself.  :)

Let me know if you send in your poems.  I would suggest a separate submission for each poem :)  Once accepted, you could join in our Hall of Fame :)



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« #11 : February 24, 2015, 12:40:33 PM »

Amethyst,

Congratulations for finding the courage to publish your writings here.

Your poems are astounding. Those tasters and I am a fan. Please post more of your work here first. 
Then join Literotica.

We want first preview of all your work.

Well Done to you.

Stone & Jayc. xx


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« #12 : February 24, 2015, 12:59:59 PM »

thank you ...I'll think on it :-)
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« #13 : February 24, 2015, 11:34:56 PM »

I have my own poetry page on Facebook with more pieces ...however when I write new stuff I'll gladly post here for you to see first :-)
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« #14 : February 25, 2015, 05:43:57 AM »

Thank you Amethyst,

I think you know already by the above posts, your writings and poems are appreciated and you are building up a fan base.

Thank you for sharing them and letting us have first preview on any new work you do.



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