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[Brandybee]

Thank you for the extra input on this rule.   Rule 4  –   One story per contestant.

Decision made.    Two or more persons working on an idea  or story  together as writers  &  in the same time span will be classed as one story, no matter how many off shoots , that original idea may create.  The authors will be classed as 1 entry and as such will share any A$ credits as if 1 author. Therefore  this will exclude any other entry by the same authors either on their own or in another collusion.

If a further off shoot story is created, they may wish to publish it in the  ” Erotic Story ” section, however I ask that to protect the anonymity of authors & integrity of the  voting  period , they withhold the publishing of any second  story until a winner is announced in the contest.

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Everyone has very valid points and I will attempt to clarify the rule in a more simple way .   If the potential authors would ask themselves these questions :-

1 )   Is the story in the same time frame,  whether this be the time frame of the actual content of the story OR the real time that the authors are planning to write it ?    Yes  or  No 

2)  Are  you planning the guidelines of the story only, that is , the Time, the dates,  the Place, and the Location of the story ONLY , no other collusion as to the content ?     Yes   or   No

3)  Are you acting together to build & plan the content of the story, to swap ideas, develop & then to write that finished product, whether writing it as a lone author OR together jointly ?   Yes or No

If the answers to questions  1 and 2    is  YES  and 3  is  NO –  then  I would consider this to be two separate stand alone stories.  The story content would be different and the originality of the writers maintained.  I would  consider allowing separate story submissions and both to go forward as contestants.  However, I would look closely at both stories  to satisfy there is no other collusions &  planning. 

If  the answers to 1 and 3  is  YES and 2  is No  ( because of the word ONLY )  –  then I would consider this to be one story and the writers working jointly together. The story and its content would be the result of the parties discussing ideas,  planning, colluding, conspiring together to ensure the finished product is written and submitted.  This would be 1 entry , any other stories written would not be allowed by the same author or authors due to the input or collusion on the original idea.   The authors would share any A$ allocated as if 1 author.

They can either decide to publish any other stories  that have grown from the original idea in the Erotic Story section but ,  I ask this be after a winner has been announced in the contest concerned,  to maintain the integrity of the voting.
Or  if they wish, it can be submitted as another story  by the authors concerned in a future  Erotic Story Contest, however, consider your anonymity may be compromised due to the similarities of the original story submission.  It would also, of course, have to fit in with the new contest Story Theme decided .

Hopefully, this clarifies and satisfies any further questions that may have arisen over this Rule 4. 

@  Momma Andrea's  scenario –   Two stories , different viewpoints from the same charachter's involved in the same encounter …  I would most likely consider this to one larger story and one entry to the contest,  as the authors would have to collude and swap ideas in order for the time line and events to run evenly and make sense.  A classic example of this would be the The Ice House Foursome with Tight, myself, Stone & Jayc –  1 story, 4 authors.

If  there is no other collusion except, time, dates, place, location, and different encounters,   I would consider as stand alone  story submissions and entrants.
An example of this would be ” Blu's sacrifice ” in the Ice House . This story line involving Bear, Blue & Adera  was in the same location and in the same time frame but was a completely separate story to ” The Ice House Foursome”  and no collusion except to ensure that the authors of the separate stories did not ruin each others story lines.  It is fairly obvious that Bear, Blu &  Adera did not have any input in the ” Foursome” story & vice versa.
However,  I would look very closely at such stories to satisfy there are no other collusions evident.

@  Hentaiboy69 –   I agree The AB&G  is an intertwining fantasy story topic & thread & as such  the posters are encouraged to interact together and work their stories together & combined, some stories require more involved planning by charachter's than others but even so,  charachter's on the sidelines  are still  involved and encouraged to become involved in encounters , to mirror post,  even if just seeing it happen.  I would class this as one large community story.
There may be instances where I may consider stories as stand alone but it would have to satisfy the criteria set out above and again I would have to look very closely at the stories to ensure what collusion there is.

The Erotic Fantasy Tale are stand alone stories at the moment , as it satisfies the time, date, place, & location  collusion only,  however,  that may also progress to the authors working together in the future in the same encounters and therefore a joint story effort.

  Phew ….    Hopefully, I haven't missed anything       mmm     I'm sure Tight never had these problems       

[Brandybee]

Just so you other Mods know … I don't remember it  at all, way.. way …  before my time  so ” kepow”  ” Thwak”  take that! 

Camel Toes – a girls worst nightmare –  it would so be airbrushed now…    but  I did hear Boys had to wear glasses more about that time ….  obviously doing something to make them go … blind  or something … who knows.. like I said .. way way before my time  :

[Brandybee]

New Pose idea for MM  –    ( Version taken from idea I proposed in MF    )

MM Dancing Delight – man dancing for his partner.

Man sitting watching the male perform a  private  dance for him,  Dancing  but in  male weight lifting type poses,  flexing those  pecs  and biceps as he sways to the music, preferably in black & white cuffs, tight black pants and a black bow tie

Male Dancer actions

1 flexing triceps and biceps and kissing each bicep
2 turning round flexing shoulder
3 Stepping forward on each leg and flexing  thigh muscles
4 clenching / flexing buttocks,
5 A good hands behind the head and overly accented hip gyration…& pelvic thrusts
6 walking forward and straddling receiver so he can stroke his chest, tummy and shoulders
7  Dancer turning round so receiver can bend forward and stroke his back and shoulder
8  Dancer turning round so receiver can stroke & fondle his buttocks
9  Dancer  walking round the back of the receiver so Dancer can stroke his hair and kiss his neck
10  Dancer walking behind him and running his fingers / head stroke of his hair
11  Dancer walking round the Receiver so Dancer can gently massage his shoulders
12  Dancer sitting astride the Receiver so Dancer can snog him, holding his hair sensuously
13  Dancer sitting astride the  Receiver so Dancer can breathe into his ear and gently caress inside with his tongue
14  Dancer pleasure face shutting his eyes in bliss at Receiver's touch

Recever's actions

1 leaning back in the chair, enjoying the performance
2 moving forward in the chair to stare intently at  one of the actions the dancer is performing ( remember Kevin Costner in Body Guard)
3 Dancer straddling Receiver and kissing Dancer's chest
4  Dancer straddling Receiver and holding and caressing Dancer's waist
5  Dancer straddling Receiver and Dancer pulls Receivers head to his for a deep snog
6  Dancer straddling Receiver and Dancer fondles Receiver's cock and balls
7  Receiver masturbating  himself  whilst watching the  male dancer
8  Dancer straddling Receiver and Receiver kisses Dancer's tummy and belly button
9    Dancer's body fondle of himself from his neck, nipples to his cock and up again
10  Receiver fondling Dancer's legs
11  Dancer Stradling Receivers legs and caressing Dancer's chest and abs.
12  Dancer  whispering in Receiver's ear the things Dancer would like to do
13  Dancer holding his hand , cupping his cheek and then kissing the inner palm open mouthed
14  pleasure face, shutting his eyes at Dancer's sweet caresses .

Views or improvements  to pose  welcomed.

[Brandybee]

Inspired by another Topic .   I thought it would be useful to high light the poses you would wish upgraded and how .

Here's one I know to ….

Pole Dance..   all variants   

A)   S  dancing for M
    S  dancing for  F
C)   S  dancing for  S
D)   F  dancing for  S

Please could the  S  erection be removed in each Poll Dance Pose and  have the option of wearing briefs or very sexy underwear  .     

( Noted Adera, Concerto  )

[Brandybee]

Oh I had a lot of fun with this one, certainly a lot for the girl to control and the kiss is just fabulous. Top marks, go buy ;D

[Brandybee]

I would like to see a version of Hot Legs & Feet where the  girl massages the feet and legs of a man.

[Brandybee]

I am enjoying it so far PitVK.  It has great potential and very intriguing.  I look forward to reading more.

Could I ask a favour , so it makes for easier reading, would you paragraph after every 5 or 6 lines or so, or where fitting.  It helps people like me to keep their place whilst reading and none English speakers to translate easier.

Thanks ever so.  And please, keep writing.  I hope you will enter a story for the  Erotic Story Contest 4 – First Time   also 

I am the  Contest Manager and would love to receive a story off you.  The theme is  ” First Time”  which has a very broad meaning …  it can be the first time you tried something new,  a first holiday alone, a first business trip,  meeting someone for the first time …  as long as you clearly identify  A FIRST …  you have satisfied the theme.

The second thing that must be clearly identified in your story is something from the Achat shop –  ( They are sponsoring the contest you see ) The something needs to be clearly identified ,  with a detailed description in your story  so readers can easily identify it.
It can be a room,  a background or an outfit from  male, female or shemale wardrobe.

The prizes are fabulous too if you are voted  in the top 3 by Forum members.  All other story submissions get 600A$  – so you see, its well worth the effort.

The topic below tells you the rules, the submission dates and how to enter  :-

Forum  Home Page / Organisations & Events / Contests / EROTIC STORY 4 CONTEST  “ First Time”  THE RULES                            https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2196.0.html

[Brandybee]

You know, I read this  topic discussion and immediately thought of the below alleged disease….

Munchausen by proxy syndrome (MBPS) is a relatively rare form of child abuse that involves the exaggeration or fabrication of illnesses or symptoms by a primary caretaker.
In MBPS, an individual — usually a parent or caregiver— causes or fabricates symptoms in a child. The adult deliberately misleads others (particularly medical professionals), and may go as far as to actually cause symptoms in the child through poisoning, medication, or even suffocation. In most cases (85%), the mother is responsible for causing the illness or symptoms.

Heres my thoughts on the topic….
So if you are drunk, drugged up or attention seeking and cause something serious to happen ,  then it is only right you do everything in your power to put it right.. 
If its accidental, or incidental … then you are to blame & should be punished appropriately.

If it is on purpose , then that is premeditated and  aggravates the offence and criminality and you should be locked up.

Hero … no …   

Only if  you did save someone from serious risk or harm ,  was not the cause of it and were noble in your actions,  and being drunk or drugged up  was in fact , one of those things at the time… Then you can be hailed a hero and get your medal.

[Brandybee]

Decision made.    Two or more persons working on an idea  or story  together as writers  &  in the same time span will be classed as one story, no matter how many off shoots , that original idea may create.  The authors will be classed as 1 entry and as such will share any A$ credits as if 1 author. Therefore  this will exclude any other entry by the same authors either on their own or in another collusion.

If a further off shoot story is created, they may wish to publish it in the  ” Erotic Story ” section, however I ask that to protect the anonymity of authors & integrity of the  voting  period , they withhold the publishing of any second  story until a winner is announced in the contest.

I hope this clarifies  Rule 4  –   One story per contestant.

Thank you Tango, Bear for your input. 

[Brandybee]

I second that.

This is a great story Momma_Andrea.  Cant wait to read the next installment.

[Brandybee]

Satoire,  Congratulations on your being offered a role.

The way I see it,  this is about making new friends … so I think you should stay in Secret Valentine, if you wish .  You can PM your prospective partners for when you are free , and if Pafe does not mind offering a consolation for the delayed dates … then I guess that's the  luck of  drawing you….    Almost like 2 for the price of 1 …  I'm sure there wont be any complaints on their part. 

Then when you are able… the dates can be carried out.  Who knows, you may find someone who's time line fits in with your rehearsals.

I hope you do stay  and I wish you all the luck in the world in your performances.

[Brandybee]

This is an interesting query that I have been asked recently :-

Rule  4. Only one story per contestant.

A potential  contestant has asked if they would be allowed to  write a story independently and yet intertwined with the story of another contestant .  It would be a collusion of their theme/ idea / storyline  but  a separate story in itself, where their charachters may or may not meet.

Would I class this as one  joint entry or two separate entries?

I am of a mind to class it as two separate stories & entries if they choose to write it in this way,  but they would not  be able to satisfy  the rule, I feel that they did not write both stories together.

So, I guess the question is …  1)  Would you class this as 1 or 2 stories?
                                                2 )  Does it matter if there is  such a collusion as long as the authors write the stories  independently of each other?

I am interested in your views before my final decision.

[Brandybee]

LOL.    That is spooky !!    Well spotted Covems.  

You can still have your Covems Angels of course ( Love that name btw ).

Are you saying you do not wish for your idea to be expanded and possibly amended into a game for Forum?   It would be separate from your own  game.  This would  be a discussion to see if it could be made viable and how..  of course if you wish to withdraw this idea.. that will be respected.

[Brandybee]

I like this idea of a Topic  ( Well done Lover )  to discuss and hammer out the rules of  new games here and how they would work in the Forum Village and what is expected of the participants & the prizes etc….

Just a thought,  perhaps once agreed and its viable ,  then  the rules should be agreed, the name of the game decided and afforded its own topic  and placed as a sticky in the appropriate section –   very similar to the Erotic Story 4  Contest . See below :-

Forum  Home Page / Organisations & Events / Contests / EROTIC STORY 4 CONTEST  “ First Time”  THE RULES                             https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2196.0.html

One of the successes here, I feel  is   

Forum Home Page / Organisations & Events / Events / Secret Santa   
  https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2149.0.html

and

Forum Home Page / Organisations & Events / Events / Secret  Valentine  https://funnyadultgamesplay.com/forum/index.php/topic,2189.105.html

These  ” Secret….  ”   games should  now have its own rule topic for easy reference  and  a topic rule slot  for potential players to be directed  to it without having to wade through  all the discussions and conclusions.

I like the idea of Covems ” Mission Impossible.. Task ” …  However, it will require adapting for F, M & S to take part, clear  instructions on how to obtain the required image as proof,   and  the  ” M” ( James Bond Boss LOL )  or adjudicator of the game to be identified .

If these & the rules can be hammered out, then a request to the Achat Gods can be presented  to award A$ credits to the winner.

Same for the Bingo and Lottery games.

Seeing as we are discussing Covems game more –  Shall we do his first, and then the Bingo and then the Lottery  ideas and games.  ? Then  other ideas suggested.

So I suggest we discuss and decide the following for each game :-

1  Name of the Game
2  Adjudicator / Referee  & what is expected of him or her
3  Rules of the game for participants .
4  What is expected of the participants  if they agree to partake. eg Posting their experience / proof of completion.
5 The prize(s) for the winner(s).
6 The forfeit(s) for the loser(s ) if any.
7 The forfeits,  should they sign up to play and their participation in the game be imperative,  they then, renege on their promise ( Eg standing a date up /  not making a date if required to do so ) . If their participation is not imperative to the game, then it matters not if they partake and a forfeit need not be required.

Let the discussions begin …   

[Brandybee]

Hey, Thundersax,  so pleased you  have decided to enter a story for the contest.  Lover has already answered your question as to the Topic with the Rules for your ” First Time ” Story.

If you require any further help,  you know where we are, here or in the game   Just ask. 

I love forward to receiving your entry.

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