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I will try to explain what I mean with the mirrored effect on most templates for outfits.
On the picture below, you see 3 templates for outfits. The female shirt, the male top and the male singlet. I've chosen these to show how the map is 'folded' around the avatar. In the top part of the picture is the female, regular shirt. The green one that is offered for free if I'm correct. As you can see, the piece of clothing is 'cut' in half and folded open, the sleeve is just one sleeve.
So when adding texture to the body of the shirt, there is no mirrored effect. The whole surface of the cloth will be seen completely. The sleeve however, is folded twice around the arm of the avatar, in other word, is duplicated from the single arm in the map. One amr in the map, makes two arms on the avatar.
In the pics of the male outfits, the effect of the arm is also applied to the body of the piece of clothing. You see only half of the front, half of the back and one sleeve. That means the half of the outfit is duplicated, mirrored and folded around the other side of the avatar. This is what I mean with the mirrored effect.
To make the example even more clear:
Well,
is this better?
I step in between Sexi’s legs, lean in and find her warm, soft lips. My arms slide around her waist and as I lick her lips with the tip of my tongue, I pill her tighter against me. The short, pleaded skirt of her new outfit slowly slides up her legs as her pelvis touches mine, the warmth of her sex washing over my crotch, the reaction of my body, obvious and strong.
“Hmm, can’t think of anything to make it look better. Better prevent it from wrinkling at this moment though..”
My hands slide down her back and find the little zipper of her skirt and slowly push it down. Her skirt loosens around her hips and slides down a little while my hands slide up and find the bottom of her top. Fingertips slide underneat, digits curl and with a fluent move, I take her top off over her head and raised arms. I hang the top over the edge of a chair, then lean her down, her back resting on the desk when I step out from between her thighs.
She closes her legs neatly as i pull the skirt off her hips and drape if over the other side of the chair, then grab her ankles and open her legs again, sitting up on the dessk. I look down as she willingly follows my direction, discovering her sex to be bare, apparently she had something in mind when she entered the bar. I step in and watch her hands slide down my chest, her fngers pulling on the buttons of my jeans, then quickly pushing them down as the head of my cock slips into the new found space, the head peaking out from my unbuttoned fly.
I feel her body twitch in my arms, her excitement evident from the sweet, sultry scent of her excitement, drifting up to my nose as she spreads her thighs further. Her fingers fold aorund my shaft and slowly she pulls the foreskin down, exposing the leaking, wet tip. I look at her, pulling her gace on my member away and looking her eyes in with mine, as I move in slowly. The head of my member drags along the inside of her thigh, until it reaches her heated entrance, the petals of her sex already opened and glistening with wetness.
I place my hands on her shoulders again, push her back to the desk and feel her hook her ankles together behind my back. My hands drag down her body, over her perky breasts, her nipples dragging along the palms of my hands, then over her stomach to her hips. I look demandingly in her eyes as I pull her closer to me, the head of my shaft now pressing against her lips, opening them slowly. I smile, seeing the glisten of desire in her eyes, then tilt my hips and push myself into her welcoming channel slowly.
I hear her moan and feel her body tense as her heated tunnel; is slowly taken by me, the grip on her hips intensifying as i enter her deeper. She doesn’t look away, answers my urgent look, but can’t keep her body still. Her hips start moving against me, before I am fully inside her sex, coaxing me to push in deeper, massaging me with her inner walls. I keep pushing forward slowly, until i feel her lips stretch around the base of my shaft, then touch my body, leaving a kiss of her juices behind.
I start to move between herlegs, feeling her heels dig into my back, her call to feel me inside her again as soon as I retreact. I find a quick pace which is immediatly matches by her writhing and circling hips, her hands now on her knees, pulling her legs apart wider. Her anticipation met, though unexpected in its form, i see her face distort with pleasure, the flow of juices from her channel increase and then the sudden spasm of her inner walls as sha collapses into an orgasm, her peak reached while moaning for more, gasping for air.
As I feel her contract in her pelasure, I slowly ease down the speed of my thrusts, until I am deeply burried inside her, holding still. The tight grip on her lips released, my hands now slowly drifting over her body, soothing her tremors, the aftershock of her pleasure. I lean in and kiss her gently, then slowly pull myself from her.
While she’s marked me with her scent, the sweet smell drifting up to my nose, i tuck my member away and pull my shirt over it, at least until the swell has subsides. I help Sexi off the table as soon as she caught her breath and regained enough strength to stand on her own legs. I hand her the skirt and top and watch how she dresses, then pull her into my arms, kiss her deeply and whisper in her ear.
“If you win in the pudding Pit, you might get a night long of this treatment..”
I see her smile, feel her put her arms around me, then suddenly her tongues slips through my lips as she kisses me passionately.
“Are you serious about me getting into that Pit?
“Ofcourse I am… I can’t wait to see and I am sure the other guys in the bar will be flocking the pitt when you’re all skimpy dressed making your appearance.. besides, there’s no turning back, Covems will announce the first fight soon.. Now, shall we have a drink? I’m pretty thirsty…”
Sexi takes me offered hand and together we leave the office, feeling the eyes of half the bar fix on the door as it opens. Both with a blush on our faces walk up to the bar, just missing the new, imppressive bartender as he scuffs off, chasing dwarfs. With my experience of having my own restaurant, I open the tap and draft myself a beer without walking behind the bar, and offer Sexi a glass of ice water. She giggles and accepts with a smile, moving away as she’s called by Jane and Karen. As I let my eyes drift over the crowd, I see a number of new people around. A strong guy right next to the bull, dust in his hair and face, apparently thrown off. But assuming from the buzz in the crowd, he did well. Next to me is ssgt seated, and i raise my hand for a toast.
“How’s it going, buddy? Having a nice time?”
all praise goes to the winners.. A personal congratulations to Jay9, ms Pafe and ms Brandy.. Well done, your stories captured the hearts and favor of the forum.
I'm looking forward to receive stories from all contestants in this contest for the next competition.. “Time Travel”. Stories will be accepted starting tomorrow..
The poll has closed, time to disclose the next theme for story contest III
Proudly presenting:
“Time Travel”Announcing a new erotic story contest. For anyone to enter, judge or enjoy reading. Starring the theme of the contest: Time Travel.
As discussed on forum, something from AChat will be incorporated in each story, to emphasise the connection with the game, and to recognise the dev-team for sponsoring the contest. As before, there will be an entry period with a deadline, and then a voting period with a deadline as well. This time less cramped in time.
For anyone who’d like to enter, please take note of following notifications:
Rules:
1. Please do not break regulations or laws when submitting your story.
2. In the story, the central theme and something from Achat must be incorporated. The theme is Time Travel, the link to Achat must be based on a room, background or outfit, and preferably recognisably described.
3. The length of the story must not exceed 2 posts. 1 post allows 20,000 characters. That includes spaces as well. About 5500 – 6000 words, is the limit per story.
4. Only one story per contestant.
5. To submit your entry, please pm your story to the contest manager: tightfit74. When the story has been received, you will receive a message confirming the entry. Posting a story on forum by yourself, will disqualify you from the contest.Please use following lay-out to submit (with many thanks to you know who you are..
[Subject] (to be inserted into the PM Subject Line above)
“Erotic Story Contest II”[Message]
[HEADER] = Title
pages: number of pages (A4 or US)
Words: number of words, without Title
Characters (without spaces): number of characters
Characters (with Spaces): number of characters & spaces
Included Components: (whatever option from Achat is chosen, please describe here)[BODY] (the story submission – to be posted as is by the contest manager)
[FOOTER] = Writer's Name & Date of Submission
Prizes:
1. The winner of the contest will win 10.000 A$ or 1 year subscription.
2. The runner-up will get 5000 A$ or 6 months subscription
3. Second runner-up gets 1500 A$ or 1 month subscription
4. All other contestants will receive 250 A$ for submitting their stories.If either of the podium places are shared (in the other contest first place was shared), first prize is shared and the second runner up will get 3rd prize.
If 2nd place is shared, the prize will be shared and 3rd prize will not be awarded.
If 3rd place is shared, both contestants will receive 750 A$.Dates:
Submitting: opening date for submitting stories is August 4th.
Deadline: The deadline for submitting your stories is November 1st.Voting: The poll will be opened Friday, November 2nd .
Closing: The poll will be closed Thursday, December 27thWinners will be announced Friday, December 28thI wish all contestants good luck, and all forum members, guests and dev team a lot of enjoyment when reading…
Thanks Jayc,
for girls it is no problem making a shirt with the logo. For guys it will be a bit more difficult. i can only place it on the arms.. but I'll give it a go..
I fiddled some with the shirt for girls this weekend. Let me know what you think?
I stop and turn in my tread as the room fills with smoke, a coffin is brought in and Janine makes her entrance. I turn and smile, touch my forehead with my fingers, then swing them down in a gallant wave of welcome. With a hint of mockery in my face, I watch her disappear into the pool room, her destination all to clear. The Ice cellar seems to have found their mistress.
With two glasses in my hands, I walk up to Sexi, who is still straddling the mechanic bull, whispering in its make believe ears, as if she is pleading with him to keep her on his back. I watch her for a few moments, a sweet smile forming around my lips, then wink at JD, who understands what I’m hinting at. With a sudden jolt, the mechanic beast comes to live and with a loud yelp Sexi grabs hold of the strap around the beasts’s torso.
I step to the side as the mechanical bull starts to twist and turn, hurling Sexi’s body all over it’s back as she clings on for dear life. If eyes could kill, I’d have dropped dead and turned to dust after the first time she locks hers in with mine, after her second pass, there would have been nothing left but a fading memory of me. With a big grin on my face, I raise my glass and shout at her, the music of the country boys overwhelmingly loud.
“Machines don’t take well to hypnotism!”
In a reflex she releases the grip of one hand to shake her fist at me, and immediatly is thrown off as the bull starts its next swing. Sexi tumbles and rolls over the mat and dusty floor, ending up at my feet. Her clothes all out of shape, parts of her body all too visible for the glaring eyes of the guys around the bull penn. I help her too her feet and support her by her elbow, as she sways and stumbles, dizzy from the ride on the bull. I look at JD and wink, he’s made up for some of his action to make me fly after 5 secs.
I offer Sexi her glass, red raspberry and cranberry juice, with a twist of lime and crushed ice. As she puts it to her lips, she spills and the red juices runs down her chin and neck, drizzling in between her breasts. Her tight, wet shirt sucks in the juices and colors pink. From the corner of my eyes I see Covems approach and grab him by his shoulder as he passes.
“Covems, when your pitt is done, I have the a volunteer for the first pudding fight. She brought her own topping”
I point at Sexi and her raspberry shirt, her nipples pushing through the fabric like ripe cranberries, and smile when I see the surprised and appalled look on her face. Quickly I grab her shirt as she turns and tries to flee, the fabric suddenly tearing, leaving her in a sexi, lace bra in the middle of the bar. Embarrassed by the situation I put her in, I quickly grab her arm, drag her to the office while scooping up Brandy on the way over.
“Brandy, can you hide Sexi in the office for a while? I accidentally ripped her shirt apart and well, can’t let her stay like this. I have a cheerleaders uniform in the back of my car, I’ll go get it quickly..”
I leave the office quickly, heading out of the bar, as suddenly my eye falls on the list for the male striptease. 4 names are on there now, and to my surprise mine is there too! That little… brat… I stop and turn, head to Covems and whisper in his ear. He listens carefully, then his face turns into one big smile as he nods.
“Time to turn the tables, we’ll call it even after this..”
Quickly I go to my car and take the box of uniforms from the backseat, then return to the office. I open the box and show the 4 different outfits to Sexi, who picks one. Brandy has left the office, giving Sexi some privacy to change. Slowly I walk up to the door, turn the handle then turn my head as I hear Sexi’s voice..
The final design for the roaring 20's dress. FGollowing the advice of a dear friend and reacting to comments on forum, I changed the color of the shoes, and added a second pair. The set will be in the shop like this, as will be the Amazone outfit, the squaw outfit, the butterfly and fire fighter girl. For males, the 20's suit will be added, the Conan-outfit and the native american outfit. In what order and when the releases will be, is unknown to me.
That is the main reason why I've been so involved in the designing (besides the fact that I love doing it). If the dev-team isn't designing clothes, they can focus on the other things the forum is asking for. Maybe it is the summer holidays for them at the moment and they don't have a full staff available. I hope that in september, more poses for the lgbt community will be released
Finally the moment has arrived… The second Erotic Story Contest has come to an end, a few minutes ago the poll was locked, setting the definite rankings for the stories.
With great pride I can announce, with an astonishing count of 13 votes, ‘a Secret Summer Tryst’ is the Winner! Second place is shared by two stories, ‘Bikini Girl’ and ‘Click, a Cherie and Paula story”. Congratulations with your prizes and for a job well done!
Ranking:
1. a Secret Summer Tryst, by Brandybee
2. Bikini Girl, by Jay9
Click, a Cherie and Paula story, by Pafe
4. a Siren’s Song, by Covems
la Grand’ Terre, by Tightfit74
6. Big Sur, by Jayc
7. The Travel, by Lover
My Story, by Adera
Revenge, by Azrielle
10. Firewood, by James_Dean
Summer Games, by Hentaiboy
12. High on the Hill, by SatoireBrandybee will be rewarded with the first prize of A$ 10.000!!! Have fun shopping ±'
Jay9 and Pafe will both be rewarded with the shared second prize of A$ 2.500. Congratulations!
All other contestants will receive the submitance bonus of A$ 250I would like to express my deepest gratitutde for all that have submitted their stories and all that have voted. I have enjoyed all stories immensely and found it very hard to decide on a favorite one. I hope that most of you felt that way, as in my opinion, the stories were of excellent quality and a pleasure to read. On to the next contest, which will start very soon!
I have prepared a little surprise, for both the authors as the reading audience on forum. Unfortunately, due to personal matters, I was not able to complete the surprise, but that won’t stop me to show the first fruits of my labours. So check out the stories for the surprise, you will find them slightly altered.. If anyone has objections, you know where to find me…
I also like to take the opportunity to thank two friends who have helped me put the surprise together.. You know who you are ±'
Same here.. thought it will be cet+2 that I take off my pants.. and only on friday, unless in a room or chaging outfits…
I'm not sure a boycot on clothes, rooms or other additions would help very much. As Janine wrote in a different thread, a lot was accomplished when forces worked together and approached the subject from a positive side. Yes, not hide the displeasure or impatience but also not make it the center of the argument.
I'm sure the dev-team is not impressed with the thread of not buying more clothes. It gives them an argument to NOT put time and effort into creating the asked poses, an economical one.. No income, no r&d.. (research and development)
Imo still, gathering support, have more people speak their minds and support the effort, will bring the quickest results. How would they know there is a market for those poses, if just a handful of the same people ask for them? Since I belong to the hetset, being descriptive in the poses is not my best quality. I can however, give my support as i always have
I'll swing that banner with pleasure and vigor.. Mine will be empty after tonight, midnight cet +2
So count me in. Will be a good preparation for the strip I am apparently doing in the Bar and Grill. Now is the time to either flee or flock…
for all shemales, I adressed the issue of the missing panties with the dev-team. They will investigate what went wrong and will correct the problem as soon as possible. Expecting it to be fixed with the next upgrade..
I have just finished my drink when my phone buzzes in my pants. As Karen is swept of her feet, disappearing with mrSex's arm wrapped around her, I look at my phone and read the message.
“The leaflets are ready”
With a smile on my face I push my chair back, excuse myself with Jane and Tango and head out the bar. I chuckle, the surprise I made for the management is hopefully well received. Hmm, of the two I have prepared, they might both fail. But if you don't stick out your neck, you will never gain..
Whistling 'always look on the bright side of life' I skid off the parking lot and head into town. On my way to the industrial area, I pass the pedal car of the NSPD, seeing an officer bent over, her skirt hiked up high on her hips. Against my nature, I honk as I pass, whistling shrill at the sexy officer. Hmm, I might regret that later. In my rearview mirror, I see her get a pen and notebook from her stocking and write down my license plate.
It doesn't take long before I reach my destination, the alley shady and dark, garbage cans tossed around as if the superintendant was on a high speed pursuit. “Aghighighighighi” Unable to stop myself, the funny laugh of sheriff Roscoe P. Coltrane comes to mind and rolls from my lips. With a smile on my face, I enter through the old door and walk into a small hallway. The girl behind the counter smiles, points at the box and the thin folder on a chair near the door, then goes back to filing her nails, absorbed by the process.
I pay her no more attention as a quick bye on my way out, then put the boxes in the back of my car.On my way back to the Bar & Grill, I pass the same NSPD officer, this time she is peddling her heart out, chasing a lamborghini that is racing through town. Within a few seconds the fast car is gone, leaving the officer panting and sweaty on the side of the road, her hat thrown into the dust. Her dismay obvious on her face. The super should start equiping her traffic cops with more practical aids.. Maybe some cream filled donuts will help.. Another few minutes and I am back at the bar and I take the box and folder from the trunk and walk inside, searching for Brandy and Stone. I see Brandy leaning against the bar, clinking her glass against ssgt's, her smile vibrant as always. My eyes search the rest of the bar, noticing sexi walking around, squeezing her butt as she passes me. I walk up to her and put the two boxes on the bar.
“Any idea where Stone and Jayc are? And the others? Something I’d like to show the management..”
With a meaningful look and wink, Brandy nudges her head at the office, the blinds shut and the door closed, muffled, rhythmic sounds seeping into the bar.
“Stone and Jayc are busy, something urgent they needed to 'discuss'. Covems is at his new Pit and JD is awall.. You wanted to show something?”
I grab the box and take off the lid, showing the stack of leaflets that's inside.
“well, I wanted to ask for permission to spread these around in the bar and Icehouse. It's the start of football season and since you got the wide screens and all, I thought it would be nice to introduce the teams..”
I get out one of the pamflets and hand it to Brandy, who immediatly starts reading it.
I have just finished my drink when my phone buzzes in my pants. As Karen is swept of her feet, disappearing with mrSex's arm wrapped around her, I look at my phone and read the message.
“The leaflets are ready”
With a smile on my face I push my chair back, excuse myself with Jane and Tango and head out the bar. I chuckle, the surprise I made for the management is hopefully well received. Hmm, of the two I have prepared, they might both fail. But if you don't stick out your neck, you will never gain..
Whistling 'always look on the bright side of life' I skid off the parking lot and head into town. On my way to the industrial area, I pass the pedal car of the NSPD, seeing an officer bent over, her skirt hiked up high on her hips. Against my nature, I honk as I pass, whistling shrill at the sexy officer. Hmm, I might regret that later. In my rearview mirror, I see her get a pen and notebook from her stocking and write down my license plate.
It doesn't take long before I reach my destination, the alley shady and dark, garbage cans tossed around as if the superintendant was on a high speed pursuit. “Aghighighighighi” Unable to stop myself, the funny laugh of sheriff Roscoe P. Coltrane comes to mind and rolls from my lips. With a smile on my face, I enter through the old door and walk into a small hallway. The girl behind the counter smiles, points at the box and the thin folder on a chair near the door, then goes back to filing her nails, absorbed by the process. I pay her no more attention as a quick bye on my way out, then put the boxes in the back of my car.
On my way back to the Bar & Grill, I pass the same NSPD officer, this time she is peddling her heart out, chasing a lamborghini that is racing through town. Within a few seconds the fast car is gone, leaving the officer panting and sweaty on the side of the road, her hat thrown into the dust. Her dismay obvious on her face. The super should start equiping her traffic cops with more practical aids.. Maybe some cream filled donuts will help.. Another few minutes and I am back at the bar. I take the two boxes from the trunk and walk inside, searching for Brandy and Stone. I see Brandy leaning against the bar, clinking her glass against ssgt's, her smile vibrant as always. My eyes search the rest of the bar, noticing sexi walking around, squeezing her butt as she passes me.
I walk up to brandy and put the two boxes on the bar.“Any idea where Stone and Jayc are? And the others? Something I like to show the management..”
With a meaningful look and wink, Brandy nudges her head at the office, the blinds shut and the door closed.
“Stone and Jayc are busy, something urgent they needed to 'discuss'. Covems as at his new Pit and JD is awall.. You wanted to show something?”
I grab the bigger box and take off the lid, showing the stack of leaflets that's inside.
“well, I wanted to ask for permission to spread these around in the bar and Icehouse. It's the start of football season and since you got the wide screens and all, I thought it would be nice to introduce the teams..”
I get out one of the pamflets and hand it to Brandy, who immediatly starts reading it.
“I'd have no problem with it, but let me discuss it with the others, ok?”
“I understand that, sure.. no rush. But there is something else I wanted to show. I took the liberty of making something for the Bar and Grill, a logo.. since it is missing so far.. This place is buzzing so it needs to stand out. When you show the leaflet, will you show this as well?”I hand Brandy the this folder and she opens it. Quickly my hands shoots towards her, catching the disc that was kept inside, before it falls to the floor. In my movement, I brush my hand across her stomach, touching the underside of her breasts before my fingers fold around the disc. She turns her head to me as she feels the touch of my arm, widens her eyes a little but says nothing, a mischiefous smile curling her lips. My face starts to blush, a rush of desire coloring my face and quickly I pull my arm back, placing the disc on the bar. The folder now opened fully, the inside displayed, Brandy averts her eyes away from mine and directs her attention to the sheet of paper inside the folder.
“This is just a set up, anything and everything can still be changed, or done over. Let me know if the management likes the logo..
“This is just an example, anything and everything can still be changed, or done over. Let me know if the management likes the logo.. Btw, you look gorgeous in the outfit.. I thought you’d choose the black and red one..”
Brandy turns and smiles, then directs her eyes back to the log, inspecting every detail of it. She closes the folder and puts it behind the bar, making sure it is safeguarded from spilled drinks.
“As soon as Stone and Jayc end their ‘meeting’, I will gather them all. In the meantime, beer?”
“You read my mind.. Any micro brewery beers on stock?”
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